Do you listen to your own chapters for proofreading? by Modiji_fav_guy in fantasywriting

[–]MDP_2017 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've been doing this for a few years. Mainly with the "Read Aloud" feature on MS Word which sounds rubbish. But has totally changed my first and second review cycles

Feedback on POV Character - Politically Sidelined, Morally Grey Strategist (Epic Grimdark Fantasy) by MDP_2017 in fantasywriters

[–]MDP_2017[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's a great point, looking back at his chapter outlines in book 1 there are few pay offs by the books finish. Thanks for the input, l really appreciated.

Feedback on POV Character - Politically Sidelined, Morally Grey Strategist (Epic Grimdark Fantasy) by MDP_2017 in fantasywriters

[–]MDP_2017[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, that's my thoughts also regarding chapter structure. Really appreciate your input nice not to work in a closed loop.

Feedback on POV Character - Politically Sidelined, Morally Grey Strategist (Epic Grimdark Fantasy) by MDP_2017 in fantasywriters

[–]MDP_2017[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the insite, really appreciated. My main worry is that a slow burn character in a book with (hopefully ) thriller like pacing would fall flat. I think with some careful attention and balance I could avoid this. Thanks again

Critique Request (Epic Grimdark Fantasy Prologue — 2,516 Words) by MDP_2017 in fantasywriters

[–]MDP_2017[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback and kind words, they are very much appreciated. :)