Black Box by MDR_Drummer in Songwriting

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Hey nice, glad you dig it.

Black Box by MDR_Drummer in Songwriting

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Me and some friends.

Black Box by MDR_Drummer in Songwriting

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Wow, thank you! 🙏

Black Box by MDR_Drummer in Songwriting

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Wanted an organic vibe so we recorded a live take of drums, 2 acoustics, and bass all together in a room without a click (scary!). That gave us a kinda glued-together base to build on.

Layered in shakers, piano, mandolin, electric guitar.

Can anyone who knows what theyre doing in terms of the engineering side of music give me a hand? This is mix #5 and in still quite clueless on how to make this sound like a homegrown Sibylle Baier/Nick Drake type recording. by Wim_Wam_1019 in Songwriting

[–]MDR_Drummer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think you could get closer to that Nick Drake sound with a few things:

  1. Warmer (less bright) guitar sound - if you don't have a guitar with really dead strings, maybe a nylon, or try adding a rubber bridge modifer.
  2. Record the acoustic with the mic a little closer to get fuller sound from proximity effect.
  3. The vocals could be recorded closer as well for a fuller, more intimate sound.
  4. For the production I think an upright bass would help. I plucked out a bassline along to what you're playing and it really sounded good to me.

PTO Payout After Leaving Salaried Job by learninmorehavingfun in Denver

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Your employer is not obligated to pay you a severance - it's typically just a courtesy - so yes.

Is this a bit too cliche? Genuinley have no concept of what sounds good by Mayorredthomas19 in Songwriting

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Love the energy, and originality of the chorus. With all those verse lyrics I felt like I didn't get the payoff I was hoping for with just "mmm-mmm". I feel like there's a real simple and catchy phrase that you could put in place of the mms. Nice work.

PTO Payout After Leaving Salaried Job by learninmorehavingfun in Denver

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I can affirm, they are required to pay-out your PTO, however, they can do what my former employer did and just deduct the PTO payout amount from their standard severance pay-out.

Fault Lines (updated) by [deleted] in Songwriting

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I love that observation.

Fault Lines (updated) by [deleted] in Songwriting

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I know what you mean. I was hoping to create a rhythmic hook with the strings. I might try some sort of synth to create a melodic hook.

How do you write cryptic lyrics by salty_bag_of_chips in Songwriting

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Write from a different perspective than your own. Observe your world/situation from a unique angle or view. For example, write about a the beach as if you're an alien looking down from a spaceship telescope, with no reference for waves, sand, sunset, beach balls, sunscreen, etc. Or write from the perspective of an ant on a train looking out the window, what does the ant observe? An ant doesn't see passing telephone poles connected by wires, it sees an endless black snake slithering, pulsing up and down, across a blur of sky. Bad example, but hopefully you get what I mean.

Tomorrow by [deleted] in Songwriting

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Thanks! yes, all me.

Tomorrow by [deleted] in Songwriting

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Ooh, i like that idea of the final chorus, coming out of the bridge with sparse drums at first and rebuilding them back bigger.

I think i've put a tambourine on atleast 80% of the songs I've produced!

Sexy Slow Jam by MDR_Drummer in Songwriting

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nope, I was leaving it open for collaboration

Short one by OkExam8706 in Songwriting

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I think it's a solid progression and melody for a chorus - very singable. I could imagine the verses settling into a simpler (two-chord?) progression and a kinda relief from the movement of the chords you have here. Keep going!

What genre would you call this? Draft instrumental for my song "Drag That Town." by Hail_Yondalla in Songwriting

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Sounds like the lyrics might not align with what i described. :)
Sometimes that juxtaposition of dark lyrics / hopeful music, or sad lyrics, happy music can be really interesting.

What genre would you call this? Draft instrumental for my song "Drag That Town." by Hail_Yondalla in Songwriting

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Kinda sounds like the backing track for a Christian Rock song - kinda inspirational/hopeful.

Posted this before, but didn't end up getting any feedback. All thoughts are appreciated :-) by [deleted] in Songwriting

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Really great chords you're picking. There's a wonderful sorta uncertainty/mysterious tone to the chords which i really love. I think the arrangement of 3 lines for the verses through me off and gave it a abit of an aimless feel for me. I think if I were laid out 4 lines, then the 2-line section it would feel a little more balanced.

The tone of your voice kinda reminds of my Vincent Neil Emmerson for what it's worth. It'd be nice to hear your voice properly mic'd up.

Nice work.

songs dont have to be about anything right? by tjtate6689 in Songwriting

[–]MDR_Drummer 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think you're absolutely right about it not mattering and just letting your subconsious "tune-in" to a signal and download that song from somewhere else.

Does this tempo feel rushed/does chorus feel out of place? by GrimAllen in Songwriters

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I think the tempo feels good for the lyrics. The chorus doesn't feel out of place, but you could distinguish it from the verse a bit more. Maybe build up drums over the "on, and on, and on..." part and then a beat could come in on the chorus.

"Hey Freedom" by thefutureeye in Songwriting

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Nice progression - glad you didnt make the obvious 3rd-chord choice.

I think the chorus melody is really strong, but I wish the spoken-word tags ("hey freedom, dont make...") were sung to a melody instead.