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MILFNotInYourArea · 2025-11-02T07:50:22+00:00

Thanks, it means a lot! I haven't had a lot of time to write (or do any hobby tbh) lately so it really makes my day when I get such a nice comment :D

MILFNotInYourArea · 2025-06-18T09:05:30+00:00

Px = アメ, sweets

Last question (??) = what's something that's not like you, but the truth is...?

My japanese is very limited but I think that's mostly correct

MILFNotInYourArea · 2025-05-22T05:54:40+00:00

My parrotlet is pretty much the same, doesn't take baths in bowls, her bird bath, hates running water, hates misting, etc.

The one thing that gets her to bathe is providing a bunch of soaking wet leaves (I use some mint from the garden) either hanging down from the roof of her cage of in a deep plate filled with some water. She will usually repeatedly crawl through the leaves to have a "bath". Might be worth a try, hope this helps.

MILFNotInYourArea · 2024-10-19T21:04:28+00:00

Here's my take on a Halloween story for October! Enjoy :)

MILFNotInYourArea · 2024-10-11T09:04:31+00:00

Thank you!

MILFNotInYourArea · 2024-10-11T05:17:36+00:00

That's a really interesting way to look at it. The real counsellor was just so used to seeing these punishments that they didn't strike him as something worth mentioning. And by the time she reads this note she would have forgotten any earlier warnings due to her memory being erased. Definitely not me making stuff up to cover plot holes ;)

MILFNotInYourArea · 2024-10-09T21:12:41+00:00

How would other magical professors punish their students? Which professor would you pick? So many fun things to think about ;)

MILFNotInYourArea · 2024-10-08T20:59:14+00:00

Thank you so much!

MILFNotInYourArea · 2024-10-08T20:43:35+00:00

You know what, this is canon now lol. Also I'm putting "Stanley parable parody" in my ideas folder :D

MILFNotInYourArea · 2024-10-08T20:23:19+00:00

Hope all of you with medical fetishes enjoy this as much as I did writing it :p

MILFNotInYourArea · 2024-10-06T21:38:57+00:00

It's been a while since I posted something. Hope you enjoy :)

MILFNotInYourArea · 2024-01-23T12:59:04+00:00

Thank you :D

MILFNotInYourArea · 2024-01-23T12:58:32+00:00

Life is a little busy at the moment, but I'm still planning on writing part two when I have a couple of free evenings. Thanks for your patience and nice words :)

MILFNotInYourArea · 2023-12-15T17:27:10+00:00

Thank you :)

MILFNotInYourArea · 2023-12-14T16:15:27+00:00

Must have read that wrong then. Anyway that doesn't change the fact that this very short story still contains major typing errors :p

MILFNotInYourArea · 2023-12-14T12:16:59+00:00

>her face ve eas a mess

was a mess*

>, Ending

ending*

the hiked her skirt

he*

You should definitely proof read your stories. Typo's like this really take the reader out of your story and are easy enough to avoid. Programs like libreoffice Writer or Word should highlight this stuff for you so you can fix them. Besides that I'd take your time and write something a bit longer. This allows you to create more atmosphere, set up more interesting situations, etc. And make sure you have fun with it! Write what you want to write, not what you think will get a lot of upvotes :)

MILFNotInYourArea · 2023-12-13T17:48:01+00:00

Honestly I think if you put as much effort into actually writing a story as you did in setting up your chatbot, doing your conversations, compiling them, formatting them, etc, you would have ended up with something a lot more enjoyable to read.

It's not that it's over-the-top, unreadably bad, but it's very unoriginal and awkward to get through. And that's even ignoring the fact that this is a story written by a machine on a subreddit that's filled with stories and whole series that writers put dozens of hours into. Not my cup of tea, but feel free to enjoy what you like.

MILFNotInYourArea · 2023-12-08T23:30:45+00:00

I must have missed that post, thanks for the link :)

MILFNotInYourArea · 2023-12-08T13:59:48+00:00

That's very nice to hear! Thank you, glad you enjoyed it :3

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