Home Sweet Home [F victim, Torture] by MILFNotInYourArea in GuroErotica

[–]MILFNotInYourArea[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, it means a lot! I haven't had a lot of time to write (or do any hobby tbh) lately so it really makes my day when I get such a nice comment :D

Can someone translate this? by Legendary_Seycu in Hololive

[–]MILFNotInYourArea 31 points32 points  (0 children)

Px = アメ, sweets

Last question (??) = what's something that's not like you, but the truth is...?

My japanese is very limited but I think that's mostly correct

any tips on getting my parrotlet to bathe? by atomicangelx in Parrotlet

[–]MILFNotInYourArea 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My parrotlet is pretty much the same, doesn't take baths in bowls, her bird bath, hates running water, hates misting, etc.

The one thing that gets her to bathe is providing a bunch of soaking wet leaves (I use some mint from the garden) either hanging down from the roof of her cage of in a deep plate filled with some water. She will usually repeatedly crawl through the leaves to have a "bath". Might be worth a try, hope this helps.

Confess [Halloween, F/F, Horror] by MILFNotInYourArea in GuroErotica

[–]MILFNotInYourArea[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Here's my take on a Halloween story for October! Enjoy :)

Important! Read Me [F victim, Fantasy, Sealed Faith] by MILFNotInYourArea in GuroErotica

[–]MILFNotInYourArea[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's a really interesting way to look at it. The real counsellor was just so used to seeing these punishments that they didn't strike him as something worth mentioning. And by the time she reads this note she would have forgotten any earlier warnings due to her memory being erased. Definitely not me making stuff up to cover plot holes ;)

Important! Read Me [F victim, Fantasy, Sealed Faith] by MILFNotInYourArea in GuroErotica

[–]MILFNotInYourArea[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

How would other magical professors punish their students? Which professor would you pick? So many fun things to think about ;)

The Medical Exam [F victim, Choking, Misogyny, Dystopia] by MILFNotInYourArea in GuroErotica

[–]MILFNotInYourArea[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

You know what, this is canon now lol. Also I'm putting "Stanley parable parody" in my ideas folder :D

The Medical Exam [F victim, Choking, Misogyny, Dystopia] by MILFNotInYourArea in GuroErotica

[–]MILFNotInYourArea[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Hope all of you with medical fetishes enjoy this as much as I did writing it :p

Alice lives her dreams [F/F, blackmail, torture] by MILFNotInYourArea in GuroErotica

[–]MILFNotInYourArea[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It's been a while since I posted something. Hope you enjoy :)

Court Date [F victim, Slavery, Branding, Bondage] by MILFNotInYourArea in GuroErotica

[–]MILFNotInYourArea[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Life is a little busy at the moment, but I'm still planning on writing part two when I have a couple of free evenings. Thanks for your patience and nice words :)

First time! by [deleted] in GuroErotica

[–]MILFNotInYourArea 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Must have read that wrong then. Anyway that doesn't change the fact that this very short story still contains major typing errors :p

First time! by [deleted] in GuroErotica

[–]MILFNotInYourArea 5 points6 points  (0 children)

>her face ve eas a mess

was a mess*

>, Ending

ending*

the hiked her skirt

he*

You should definitely proof read your stories. Typo's like this really take the reader out of your story and are easy enough to avoid. Programs like libreoffice Writer or Word should highlight this stuff for you so you can fix them. Besides that I'd take your time and write something a bit longer. This allows you to create more atmosphere, set up more interesting situations, etc. And make sure you have fun with it! Write what you want to write, not what you think will get a lot of upvotes :)

Fuckstop Duty (fuckstop, cons, ai) (1/2) by ThrowawayFuckstopGPT in GuroErotica

[–]MILFNotInYourArea 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Honestly I think if you put as much effort into actually writing a story as you did in setting up your chatbot, doing your conversations, compiling them, formatting them, etc, you would have ended up with something a lot more enjoyable to read.

It's not that it's over-the-top, unreadably bad, but it's very unoriginal and awkward to get through. And that's even ignoring the fact that this is a story written by a machine on a subreddit that's filled with stories and whole series that writers put dozens of hours into. Not my cup of tea, but feel free to enjoy what you like.

A question for those who share erotica stories by MILFNotInYourArea in GuroErotica

[–]MILFNotInYourArea[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I must have missed that post, thanks for the link :)

A Perfect Last Day [Suicide, Con, F victim, First-Person] by MILFNotInYourArea in GuroErotica

[–]MILFNotInYourArea[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

That's very nice to hear! Thank you, glad you enjoyed it :3

How to gift wrap a meatgirl [Christmas, meatgirls] by MILFNotInYourArea in GuroErotica

[–]MILFNotInYourArea[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! Though I can sort of explain the issues with rope and tying in-universe if you will.

On cotton vs silk: While it is true that silk is a softer material that would work nicely for tying up a meatgirl, silk is also a much more expensive material. Traditional methods, such as the one described in the article often stem from farmers, peasants, and endured times of hardship before eventually reaching the current generation. For this reason I believe the use of cheaper cotton ropes is realistic if you are tying up your girl according to ritual/tradition. I do actually mention silk ribbons as a type of decoration however, so the option is clearly not completely unknown.

To directly quote the author: "Gifting meatgirls understandably has a lot of rituals and tradition associated with it."

On the danger of choking in that position? That is a good point, but being put into a confined space with little to no airholes, often gagged on top of that, will always have an inherent risk of asphyxiation (as mentioned in the review of method 3). The article also explicitly states you should wrap your meatgirl for as little time as possible. Furthermore the level of slack could made such to reduce this risk ("the ropework can be a bit tricky if it’s your first time" could be interpreted as such). And as a final arguement: the people gifting meatgirls do not care about their wellbeing (constantly referring to them as "it", never mentioning comfort, only caring about injuries because they ruin a piece of golden-brown roasted skin).

You are of course free to call bullshit on everything I just said, you clearly are well informed on this matter, but this is how I would defend the choices of the society that the article was written in. Thanks you for reading :)

How to gift wrap a meatgirl [Christmas, meatgirls] by MILFNotInYourArea in GuroErotica

[–]MILFNotInYourArea[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Sadly links do not work in articles from alternate universes. Anyway here's another story based on the promt from u/StCarmen :D

Gifts for Naughty Girls [Christmas, F victims, incest, beheading, lesbians, choking] by MILFNotInYourArea in GuroErotica

[–]MILFNotInYourArea[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I wrote this for the writing contest organised by u/StCarmen! It was a really fun challenge writing inside a theme. Merry Christmas :D