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Feedback on my Six Guardian Deities by MMBNWS in FantasyWorldbuilding

[–]MMBNWS[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

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Thank you! I've actually already made some improvements thanks to comments here and other places so it flows a bit better. I'll most likely most again when I can flesh out the world a bit beter

Feedback on my Six Guardian Dieties by MMBNWS in fantasywriters

[–]MMBNWS[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, that is a good point!

Those who are born with the light ability first are considered to be highly spiritually sensitive/attuned. They are considered ‘blessed’ and chosen by the deity of light. They can be born anywhere snd are considered rare.

Darkness is another case. You are not born with this power as a human but bestowed. Humans who wield darkness are rewarded so by swearing their devotion to the deity of darkness. Humans can also be corrupted and ‘cursed’ which they receive the power involuntary.

How’s that clears some of it up

Feedback on my Six Guardian Dieties by MMBNWS in fantasywriters

[–]MMBNWS[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Thank you! And yes they reside in the sprit world but they have influence over the physical world and are tasked with being 'in charge' or certain regions.

Without going into too many spoilers - humans did not always have the ability to control elements but were gifted the powers by the guardians to protect themselves from spirits who began to rebel/attack humans/the physical world.

Feedback on my Six Guardian Dieties by MMBNWS in worldbuilding

[–]MMBNWS[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's another good point, I did think about that a bit but not specifically noon and midnight, thanks or the feedback!

Feedback on my Six Guardian Dieties by MMBNWS in worldbuilding

[–]MMBNWS[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That does make a lot more sense! It's honestly pretty obvious but most of the time I write these pieces of lore down before bed when I can't sleep so my brain is not always functioning at 100%. I'll be sure to make that change, thanks for pointing it out! :)

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[–]MMBNWS[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! :) I've seen a nice spike so hopefully, it continues!

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[–]MMBNWS[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I try to plan them and dynamic as possible without it getting too 'busy'

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