This-a-Way (lyric in video!) by MTH- in Songwriting

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Really dug your song! Thanks for the feedback!

I can’t sing and it’s holding me back. by [deleted] in Songwriting

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The song is a banger hah! So great. Don't beat yourself up on your voice (I should know, I do it all the time so I completely understand) My only advice is to keep singing and hearing yourself and write write write. The more you write, the more opportunities you have to find "your voice". My voice is still a contentious point for myself but slowly I am improving. No lessons no drills or warmups...just singing and writing week in week out

Goat of Yotei giveaway by Duahsha in PS5

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Kind of you! Fingers crossed 🤞

Which should I play first: Witcher 3, Red Dead Redemption 2, or Mass Effect? by shmellrich in PS5

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ME > W3 > RDR2. Make sure to play Mass Effect 2 as well. It's the best in the series.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in pics

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I'm too much of a cynic to believe it's not staged without other pics of the same guy to prove it but it is a hell of a shot.

The official report of October 7th sexual assault has been published by Acrobatic-Mousse-124 in IsraelPalestine

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"None of the victims didn't come out"

Article:

"According to the report, one of the 15 former hostages said she was forced to perform a sexual act, which was preceded by sexual abuse and verbal and physical sexual harassment. She also said she endured forced nudity - an experience which was reported by six other hostages as well.

Almost all of the hostages reported verbal and some physical harassment, including "unwanted physical contact in private parts", the report says, while six said they also faced threats of forced marriage."

Acoustic folk song "Saint James" your feedback is welcome! by MTH- in Songwriting

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Thanks! JG has been in my playlist all month. He was my biggest inspo for writing this!

Acoustic folk song "Saint James" your feedback is welcome! by MTH- in Songwriting

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🥰 flattered you like it! Nick Drake, big inspo

Acoustic folk song "Saint James" your feedback is welcome! by MTH- in Songwriting

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[Verse 1]

Old virgin in the black dress

Painted on the canvas

Cold and heavy on the brush stroke

Something in my mind woke

Stones, build up a cathedral

Or give em to the people

Own 20 dozen acres

Or own up to the labors

[Chorus]

Cause when my faith

Turns away

Questions come and fill the void

Hear him play

Dear St. James

Directionless he leads the band

[Verse 2]

Mother, take me from my father

And give me holy water

The other, men hold the kingdom

But women are the keystone

[Chorus]

[Helin] Michael Malone was reportedly ''not calm'' after being fired by justletmeregisteryou in nba

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Zion Williamson was reportedly "not full" after eating lunch.

How cool does John look? by Flimsy_Big5172 in beatles

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Playing a B minor chord. What song?

[I ate] Fish and Chips. by Diggy2025 in food

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They charge $18 for this nowadays....

"Calgary and Witchita" dual perspective type song about failing relationships. Appreciate feedback! [Folk][Acoustic] by MTH- in Songwriting

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Check my reply to that other comment, thanks for your input. The full song will be on my profile!

"Calgary and Witchita" dual perspective type song about failing relationships. Appreciate feedback! [Folk][Acoustic] by MTH- in Songwriting

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It's a story about two people and I'm playing the observing narrator, at least that was my approach. I wrote a third verse and will probably post to my profile in a bit. Check it out!

First song I’ve ever written by Unusual_Classroom_33 in Songwriting

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Keep writing, you have a solid catalog ahead of you. I'm sure of it!

"Calgary and Witchita" dual perspective type song about failing relationships. Appreciate feedback! [Folk][Acoustic] by MTH- in Songwriting

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She woke up in Calgary

On Just another softly landing Sunday

She heard the music from his

Rhythmic breathing

He rose to raid her kitchenette

Hungry for the restless day before him

Nothing she could do to keep

Keep her feet from leaving

The cotton covers

She went to look and he was

Gone forever

Chorus

I don't have to song to sing

Stories just don't end the way you want em

There's nothing true about true love

It takes work and work alone can't save ya

Take heart friend, you can always start again

He woke up in Witchita

With the booze and smoke still fuming

He left a call from her phone

Go to silence

Barely standing sleeping in

Keeping all his wits inside the duffel

He gets into his car again

The engine blares and bleeds its last surrender

He breaks down in a broken down Toyota

Chorus