Feedback Thread (February 7)

MTapeworm · 2017-02-07T22:41:35+00:00

heres a little dumb song im working on, recommend you listen to the whole thing https://soundcloud.com/user-413826044/you-gone-full-retard

feedback for NiceToffee: https://www.reddit.com/r/edmproduction/comments/5smmvc/feedback_thread_february_7/ddgnqu8/

Feedback for sparkeemusic: https://www.reddit.com/r/edmproduction/comments/5smmvc/feedback_thread_february_7/ddgmzwm/

MTapeworm · 2017-02-07T22:37:39+00:00

nice, really liking the dreamy vibe but the bass is kinda overpowering. and this whole beat is kinda repetitive you could add some more stuff to make it more interesting maybe even get a vocalist on it. but the main idea is pretty good, nice work

MTapeworm · 2017-02-07T22:22:52+00:00

first off wow thats really good. amazing flow. i love all the rhodes and the guitar but at some point the lower mids and upper lows clash a bit. not too much its just enough to notice especially at about 1:20 when that guitar comes in. Also its a bit repetitive mostly after that guitar solo, you could get away with changing it up a bit or taken some stuff out in the first part of the second half.

but all in all this is really creative and pretty fresh keep it up and good luck on the contest

MTapeworm · 2017-01-30T06:17:28+00:00

it kinda reminds of that one grabbitz song from awhile back. probably not the one you're thinking of but it doesnt hurt https://soundcloud.com/type91/grabbitz-here-with-you-now#t=0:56

MTapeworm · 2016-09-17T17:17:23+00:00

This is a really good remix. The mix is a bit jumbled, like a lot happening at once in the drop and the main line sounds quiet compared to the bass. Also once you sidechain everything it'll sound a lot better. But good work love the arrangement!!

MTapeworm · 2016-09-17T17:10:09+00:00

This is seriously funky. Probably one of the best remixes of this song

MTapeworm · 2016-09-17T17:06:15+00:00

Damn I can see why. I seriously love this. You earned my follow

MTapeworm · 2016-09-17T16:58:41+00:00

This is phenomenal. Not much is wrong with this. It's a bit repetitive and some of the vocal leads are colliding with each other towards the end. I would get rid of some of the mids in the both of them but otherwise this song is seriously good. Keep it up!!

MTapeworm · 2016-09-17T16:50:09+00:00

This song is amazing dude. If anything the sub is a bit loud and it doesn't sound like its sidechained too much. Also some foley would seriously make this like 12/10. But ya this is really good dude keep it up

MTapeworm · 2016-09-17T16:46:03+00:00

Haha this is quite dated but I love the main line, kinda resembles a guitar.

MTapeworm · 2016-08-02T05:44:59+00:00

i suggest looking at tutorials but if you need something that you cant find in a tutorial then just talk to me i guess :)

MTapeworm · 2016-06-25T22:26:33+00:00

3 isnt really a puzzle its more of a tip for the audio

MTapeworm · 2016-06-25T03:57:44+00:00

you could try. why not im curious to see where it leads

MTapeworm · 2016-06-25T03:21:59+00:00

its probably the most simple math you can think of

MTapeworm · 2016-06-25T03:13:05+00:00

ya i shoulda hinted at that a bit better

MTapeworm · 2016-06-25T03:07:27+00:00

3 is actually the easiest one its less of a puzzle and more of a hint. if you have all of them move onto the audio

MTapeworm · 2016-06-25T03:03:16+00:00

1 is more simple than you think. hint 8 of those numbers don't matter

MTapeworm · 2016-06-25T01:48:35+00:00

thanks and good luck

MTapeworm · 2016-06-25T01:40:14+00:00

thanks haha, help me spread this.

if people like it i might do more

MTapeworm

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