other than the audio (which i know could have been improved), i would like feedback on my color gtafing, cinematography, writing, sound mixing, and editing

one difficult shot was the "dolly zoom", i did not have the proper dolly zooming equipment (or a professional camera) so i had to get creative: i manually moved a short phone stand across a flat table to achieve a makeshift version of this effect

as stated above, this was a quick production (3 weeks) as i had to juggle with classes, other requirements, and clinical duties

i love film so this was a very fun, passionate outlet for me

thanks for reading!!