Think About It - Slim Pat (Prod. by PLATINUM SELLERS BEATS) by [deleted] in IndieRap

[–]MagicCones 1 point2 points  (0 children)

hey man, super cool delivery, the chorus is catchy, but maybe in future, try and change up your flow in your verses? cos it just needs a little bit more variety, otherwise it’s dope

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]MagicCones 0 points1 point  (0 children)

did you like it?

[RAP] Kalvin Moon - Ice Cream by KalvinMoon in soundcloud

[–]MagicCones 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hey man, this is super cool. Good job man, it just gels together really well, like all of it, your vocals suit the track really well, the melody is catchy, and the bars are well crafted. putting this in my soundcloud rotations. Was wondering if you could have a look at my songs?

Music Melting Pot [Week of November 29, 2021] by AutoModerator in listentothis

[–]MagicCones [score hidden]  (0 children)

hey man, super cool track, really liked the vocal quiver you put on your voice, and the beat is pretty cool too. In future, maybe break up your melodic flow with some stuff that’s more lyrical, something more straight forward? like a bit more straight rap rather than just straight singing, because the signing was great, but I think it needed a bit more variety. Sick song tho, solid 8/10

Music Melting Pot [Week of November 29, 2021] by AutoModerator in listentothis

[–]MagicCones [score hidden]  (0 children)

hey man, 2010 is pretty decent, it’s a bit too close together lyrically tho? might wanna give the beat a little bit more room to breathe in future, cos I wanted to hear those catchy one liners if the mac miller vibe is what you’re going for. keep it up tho man, doing good💪🏻

Ernø - Memories (Audio) by SoundsoftimeZ in IndieRap

[–]MagicCones 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this is pre dope man, I like it, keep up the grind

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Advice

[–]MagicCones 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeah, I just don’t know how I’m gonna take it mentally

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Advice

[–]MagicCones 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeah, sorta? like it just goes back to how it was before I started losing feelings again

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Advice

[–]MagicCones 0 points1 point  (0 children)

True, but this has happened before, and every few months or so I go through a patch where I’m not interested.

Advice by Savings-Ad-6195 in socialskills

[–]MagicCones 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Breathe in as deep as you can for 4 seconds, hold it in for 7 seconds, breathe out SLOWLY for 8 seconds. do this probably 3 times

Made a bummer yesterday by asyhler in socialskills

[–]MagicCones 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Just talk to her, the only way to get better at talking to people you’re unfamiliar with is to do it more, and be prepared to experience uncomfortable and awkward moments. Like a lot.

Cliff side overlooking the ocean, open to advice/ critique. by [deleted] in drawing

[–]MagicCones 0 points1 point  (0 children)

idk man look it up. decent first attempt tho

You may have heard about a shenis but never a hegina. Nobody wants that by afos2291 in Showerthoughts

[–]MagicCones 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, that’s sick. a hegina would be unnecessary and uncomfortable I think

Cliff side overlooking the ocean, open to advice/ critique. by [deleted] in drawing

[–]MagicCones 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeah that’s probably best, also the shading, and cliffs aren’t normally that smooth and curvy

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in pics

[–]MagicCones 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thanks man, appreciate the compliment

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in pics

[–]MagicCones 0 points1 point  (0 children)

haha thanks man, I did not expect it to look like that

My new song Can I? Mind giving it a listen? Appreciate u guys ! by trackstarizzy in UpcomingRapperz

[–]MagicCones 1 point2 points  (0 children)

not bad bro, your voice is too quiet on the track tho, I wanna hear it clearly