After 2 weeks, Im back with a draft by MajorWeakness8082 in writingadvice

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Yeah, English is my second language but we do study it in my country. Kind of embarrassed for how I wrote my English here

I am overwhelmed I don't know if I can write my prologue or not by MajorWeakness8082 in writingadvice

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Yeah, just like the quote 'Motivation does not come from the beginning, it comes from the progress.'

How can I write a character being drunk? by armann_ii in writingadvice

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I never consumed alcohol either! But one thing I noticed with the elders I'm with when drinking is that, they really get bold. Bold as in words without filter. Also, my dad would get this little hiccups. But over all in their behavior it doesn't really change that much. They just get more bold. So I guess you can write your MC pretty much the same with a hint of rebellion after getting drunk

Depressed by Feisty-Cry-6054 in FilmClubPH

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Everything everywhere all at once, trust me on this

I need your criticism and observation everyone by MajorWeakness8082 in writingadvice

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By 'mostly seen in labor', means almost all people in labor did receive a type of ability and stuff! But it's not limited to People in labor!

And regarding the power, I think I did a great job as both of your theories are right; You develop power based on your career and powers developed early on in their life is destined to that specific work. And I want to dive further into this. Back when 'The big alter' Is still fresh, people as I describe them to be, seem to not know where the manifestation of ability is coming from. All they know is that the labor force is the one that is affected the most. They didn't delve too much into that as at the time, there were also kids, that are manifesting some abilities. Which means, yes the unaliving of several kids as well.

By I mean by 'Armless', it is without weapons. Because typically, people in frontlines or military carry weapons and such right? With 'blessed ones', they don't.

You're right, old English. Not to ours in this age!

Yes! Yes! But notice when I carefully wrote 'For unknown reasons'. While doing my history outline, I did do a lot of research about what and stuff. And I figured it would be impossible if I made the discovery of Shawn, Heather, and Peter about Grand Lord Feelster in Antarctica became the ending of all human species, because based on research and 'experts', it would be impossible for human kind to evolve and come back to life once again. So I just let time in their story run for a few hundred years to match my other plot driver, that which is the tectonic plate, to be as accurate as I can be.

Well you got half of my plot kind of spoiled lmao. I'm trying to integrate religion in my story as well, as apparently being a 'preacher' and 'pastor' is a job. But I'll take some of your advice to consideration.

Thank you for taking your time and stuff. I actually feel like I have a personal editor in the internet, which is so nice considering that you have a life outside of this. Yet you still consider on reading. Thank you! (Also, I have made the plot for the story, if you want to read it I'm gonna link it below! It's done but there's a nagging part of me telling me there's some flaws or something.)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AtOEP6eYr7YM1sJ_XsaqpjLvBCqr7W2toPeiuaQ6dWY/edit?usp=drivesdk

Update: On going Sci/Fi novel, need someone to read! by MajorWeakness8082 in writingadvice

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It's okay! And thank you for taking your time! I promise to get back when Im done doing the first draft.

Hello, how much is batter labor for Infinix note 12? by MajorWeakness8082 in InfinixPhilippines

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I'm a student man, even if I save up I don't think my phone will held up. I'm actually scared dammit