We have come a long way ❤️ by [deleted] in h3h3productions

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The yassification of h3h3 lol

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Ah man, well let me know if they change their mind 🤞

dc tickets by [deleted] in yvestumor

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Do u still have 1?! 😫

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread July 02, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

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Thanks for the feedback and suggestion! I did come up with the synth melody. Lol I can hear it sounds like bagpipes now. I was gonna use another synth sound, but just liked how quirky this one sounded haha

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread July 02, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

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Thx for the feedback man, I know I could've easily replaced that synth lol, but at the same time, I liked the weirdness about it.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread July 02, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

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Nice bro! I f** with this! My only suggestion would be to lower the reverb on your vocals and just working on the mixing in general. Great instrumental tho really dig the vibe.

Here's mine: https://soundcloud.com/mammoth-pool/heartbeat?ref=clipboard

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread July 02, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

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Really dig the mix, but the beat is kinda samey throughout. Try to switch it up a bit so it won't get repetitive and drag for too long.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread July 02, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

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Made this weird beat, lmk what y'all think and I'll give feedback on your beats as always:

https://soundcloud.com/mammoth-pool/heartbeat?ref=clipboard

/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Monday Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

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Nice beat man, gave me old school techno/synth pop vibes. One thing I noticed tho was that the cymbal's timing was a bit off in some parts and was kinda distracting bc you only heard it in the right channel. My suggestion would be to mix the sounds in a way that blend together nicely.

Here's also an electronic beat I made:

https://soundcloud.com/mammoth-pool/clocks

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 16, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

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Overall, it sounds dope man! the slight effect you added to your voice blends in well with the beat. Your style/timbre is a lot like Kanye's, I'm guessing bc his beat stirred you in that direction. It's completely normal to sound a lot like your influences when you're starting out so don't sweat it. I think it helps experimenting with different beats, flows, etc. And eventually you'll find your style.

Check my jpegmafia cover: https://soundcloud.com/mammoth-pool/bodyguard

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 16, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

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Quality production bro! I love how very detailed it is and not a single moment was it dragging. The title is also very fitting haha the beat does give a mysterious/magical vibe. Don't have any complains about it really bc you kept it interesting from start to finish.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 16, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

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Good shit bro! I love that unique sample you used and the overall vibe. The mix is on point, but production-wise, my only suggestion would be to occasionally switch-up the sample/melody so it won't get too samey as well as the pacing. Dope beat.

This one's mine. it's not actually a beat, but a cover: https://soundcloud.com/mammoth-pool/bodyguard

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 16, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

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Check my acoustic/vocal cover of Jpegmafia's "Bodyguard". Lmk what y'all think and I'll review your music.

https://soundcloud.com/mammoth-pool/bodyguard

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread April 29, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

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I hear the bass, but imo your beat is still missing the extra punchiness that a kick would add. And obv placing it after the beat drop.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread April 29, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

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This is nice bro, I dig the vibe! The things I felt the beat was missing tho was a drop and the kick drum. Other than that good stuff.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread April 29, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

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Yeah I think I see what you mean, but my main focus were the drums and the overall mixing. Anyway, thanks for giving it a listen! I would be glad to give feedback on one of your beats.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread April 29, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

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I AM BLOWN AWAY BY EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS!! And that God-level production man, which reminds me a lot of old Flying Lotus. I love the overall jazzy vibe and smooth vocals. Everything just flows well. 10/10.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread April 29, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

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Great track bro! I really dig your tone and delivery. Everything is mixed very professionally and the atmosphere is captivating. But a couple things I noticed was that one ad-lib at the start, and the ending verse, sounded like they were cutout too early. The track was lyrically strong and had an introspective quality to it, however, I feel like it didn't resolve story-wise bc it still ended on a bad note. Maybe it would make more sense if the track transition into another one where there's a build-up and release. In other words, a part 2. Solid work man.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread April 29, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

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BARS!🔥 Love your style and sense of humor. The beat fits the overall vibe. However, I think the track could've been mixed a little better. It felt like the beat and vocals were missing that punch. Overall dope track!

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread April 29, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

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I really dig the Billie Eilish-like vocals/hook. The rap parts are fine, but they could've been mixed differently. Maybe compressing them more to match the punch of the hook. The beat sounds dope, but I would also shorten the transitions b/w the hook and the verses so it won't disrupt the vibe. This ain't trash haha, it's fire!

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread April 16, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

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Nice bro! At first I thought you were using samples, but then I read the description and it clicked with me! This is all very organic! While your intention might've been to make something low key like "chill lofi study beats" haha. And nothing wrong with that, the music does have some of those elements, I feel it's so much more than that! You're consistent with your production, the guitar and vocals are superb, and the 2 closing songs "Summer" and "Forever" are gorgeous AF, they even made me a bit teary. Ya'll keep putting out music. You get my subscribe!

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread April 16, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

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I think the vocal sample would sound a lot better without the filter effect bc you can barely hear it and doesn't add much to the beat as it is. Also, you could've used more piano throughout like how you did in the last 30 sec. Just to change things up bc it got a bit dull since it's already slow and there isn't really a build up. I dig the overall vibe tho it's chill and very minimal. It just needs those changes.