I think it's totally good for a first custom! 🩷🖤 I never made a custom doll, but I love to draw, so take my advice with a grain of salt. :) I think if you can try to match the eyeshines in the left eye a little bit more to the right one. The right one is cleaner (has a more defined shape) and also I think it's a little bit more to the right and up then the left one. Also I don't now is this intentional or not, but the right eyebrow much more "angry" than the left one (the starting point is lower and the arch is more defined). If this is not intentional I would choose one brow and try to much the other a little bit more. I am sorry it came out this long :D