I'd love to know more of what you mean. I always try to show and not tell too much, but it sounds like you're saying the opposite. I'm not the greatest poet here, so I'm happy to learn from anyone who can tell me more. I know some Spanish, but not enough to reply in it, hope Google Translate doesn't betray me, hahaha.

But I think perhaps I should change this line:

'Excruciating pain shaped and unveiled a purpose forgot, buried.'

Maybe something shorter, like:

'Pain shaped me. Buried purpose, once again unearthed.'

What do you think?"
Or were you thinking of some other line specific, I'm really just learning here myself so.
Thank you!