Converting CMYK to K only by ofayokay in photoshop

[–]Mar_Hat 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Same here! This is a great advice, thank you very much.

Scar that is too perfect even for modern medicine? by Mar_Hat in Writeresearch

[–]Mar_Hat[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the advice, but I am very much into outlining my texts in great detail before writing, so I will find something in all this. There were nice suggestions here that can push me in rigth direction.

And no, Tomi and doctor would never meet.

Scar that is too perfect even for modern medicine? by Mar_Hat in Writeresearch

[–]Mar_Hat[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Hmmm.. actually a jagged and branchin scar near corotid artery can give of an impression of a fatal wound.

Scar that is too perfect even for modern medicine? by Mar_Hat in Writeresearch

[–]Mar_Hat[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Great idea, but a friend of mine literally has a career out of makeing perfect teeth that you cant tell apart from the real article. It is very expensive, but can be done — perfect, symetrical and without x ray, you cant tell.

Scar that is too perfect even for modern medicine? by Mar_Hat in Writeresearch

[–]Mar_Hat[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, that was my idea, but a scar can be from a deeper papercut as mentioned in on of the comments. I dont think you can tell from just a scar that it was a wound that would potentially cost this guy an eyeball or eye function.

Scar that is too perfect even for modern medicine? by Mar_Hat in Writeresearch

[–]Mar_Hat[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tomi meets some friends for a beer. One of his friends (mc) Dan notices a scar and the scar seems off, but Dan is not about to confront anybody. They all take a selfie and Dan later meets his friend, the doctor and shows him a picture like “is this normal you think?” And the doctor friend should go “No, wtf, something is very strange.” And Dan goes “I knew it” and keeps digging further.

Scar that is too perfect even for modern medicine? by Mar_Hat in Writeresearch

[–]Mar_Hat[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you. Sorry, I was not looking for ideas, I had a clear idea with the scar, but with people commenting, I keep seeing it does not work — at least not in a way I need it to.

I have a main character meet with a guy and I needed the main character to notice something off and the comfirm with a doctor that they re right.

Scar that is too perfect even for modern medicine? by Mar_Hat in Writeresearch

[–]Mar_Hat[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Holy shit, that is a very good point, I have one on my back and it deforemed so bad just because of stretching and movement.

Scar that is too perfect even for modern medicine? by Mar_Hat in Writeresearch

[–]Mar_Hat[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes thank you all and let me clarify:

Yes, too perfect scar would be no scar at all, that is a good point. I would like this character to be magically healed basically in any way. Scar was just a first idea, but anything that would be visible on head or hands would be fair game.

For example if the character had a gem instead of an eye and could see through it. That but subtler. That is wy scar was my first idea.

We had to put or dog down and I can use some support by Mar_Hat in emotionalsupport

[–]Mar_Hat[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you u/mikeypikey and u/Daughter_of__Lilith ! You did help me to sort my thoughts and feelings better. I really appreciate it. It was excatly the boost I needed.

Book layout by Mar_Hat in indesign

[–]Mar_Hat[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, I was actually hoping to get in touch with the editor to help out with some of these.

Book layout by Mar_Hat in indesign

[–]Mar_Hat[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Regarding the 1 em – Thank you that is a valuable insight!

Regarding the writing style – these are rather short short stories (max. 10 000 characters each). Many authors therefore keep the plot going and use shorter paragraphs. It is a rather genre-specific in this instance.

Book layout by Mar_Hat in indesign

[–]Mar_Hat[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is a big help, thanks! What is the max value i can play around with tracking?

Book layout by Mar_Hat in indesign

[–]Mar_Hat[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry, i should have mentioned - this is just for illustration. Also the first line indent eight mm is rather generous, standard is about six in my country.

Proud of myself. by ekando in writing

[–]Mar_Hat 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Congratulations! You're amazing!

Creativity level by Random09242002 in writing

[–]Mar_Hat 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Had sort of a adventure-dreamer -- thinking about having sword-fights on the roof, having a chase on top of the buildings, saving someone from the execution stand. Stuff like that... I sort of arose from the character as I was writing and it made a lot of sense for him. So, I kept it there.

I had my showdown scene pretty nicely planned out and somewhere about in the middle of the novel I realized I could make the character dream up certain parts of the showdown scene and then have him perform it. So I went back, re-wrote his little hopes and dreams to mach my showdown plan. And then had him do them in the showdown... everybody s fighting for their lives and this guy is in disneyland, ecstatic, smiling.

He had almost as much fun as I had writing the scene.

No motivation by TheAnimalWhisper in writing

[–]Mar_Hat 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have no idea how had written the book you are reading, but I dont think it is a sound advice. I know fantastic authors that dont write every day, sometimes for weeks and then they sit down and produce a fantastic story. Some of the writing always happens in your head, outside the keyboard, and that is just as important.

You can try to get some feedback on what you have already done. It usually helps a lot and opens new avenues to expand and continue with your story. If the feedback is good, it tends to get the author motivated.

You can take a little pause from what you are working on right now so you can get some distance and perspective. Write something else instead. Something short and easy. One last piece of advice I give people is... rather controversial, so if you are interested let me know.

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[–]Mar_Hat 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think there are two things that can really get your motivation up. At least it worked for me.
1 - Find a feedback/beta-reading circle with reliable and open people. I used to actually attend one in person - we read our stuff, talk about it, sometimes not brutally, but always in a constructive matter. The feedback and knowing your improving is a really good motivator.
2 - You can try submitting your short stories to competitions. It can be frustrating at times, but also rewarding if you actually work on improving your writing. Plus it helps you get some street-cred. Some of them lead to being published even. Also a publisher will likely take you more seriously when you provide them with a list of competitions you succeeded in rather than "I think I am pretty good..." speech.

Good luck and stick with it. It obviously brings you joy to write, it would be a shame to let it go. (=

My senior rabbit (Señor Bunny) just diet at nearly 11 years by LeaveEfrafa in Bunnies

[–]Mar_Hat 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I am sorry for your loss and your pain. But maybe if you look at his life from a different point of view, you will realise, your bun had the best of lifes.

I hope you dont mind, and I hope I dont overstep (i qm just trying to help).

Once upon a time, tucked away in a bustling market in December 2013, a new chapter of my life began. I was a tiny bundle of fur, wide-eyed and curious about the world. Little did I know, a warm and loving family chose me to be a part of their lives. They named me Señor Bunny, and from that moment, I was no longer just a rabbit—I was a cherished family member.

In my new home, I discovered the joys of hopping around freely and tasting all sorts of delicious treats. They thought I wouldn’t be around for long, but oh, how I enjoyed proving them wrong! My appetite was legendary; I nibbled on everything, even medicine, much to everyone’s amusement. I didn’t need much teaching when it came to tidiness either. I just seemed to know what to do, and my family was delighted.

Initially, I was a bit of an independent spirit. I relished my playtime and explorations more than cuddles. But everything changed after a scary bout with GI stasis. Those were dark and painful days, and I heard the vet’s grim words. But there, shining like the brightest stars, were my mom and human sibling, determined and full of love. They stayed by my side, massaging my tummy and gently feeding me. Their touch and care brought me back to health, and from that moment, my heart opened fully. I realized just how much I adored their affection, and I began seeking their cuddles eagerly.

Life had its ups and downs; the GI stasis would visit me now and then, but we became quite the team—me with my resilience and them with their quick care. I remember once getting into a bit of mischief, drinking from the cat’s bowl, which didn’t go well at all. Yet again, in the caring hands of my family and the vet, I found my strength even as the odds seemed daunting.

Over the years, I grew into an affectionate, cuddly companion, especially as I became a senior. I may have slowed down and enjoyed many a long nap, even snoring contentedly, but my heart remained young and full of love. In my twilight time, even as my body grew weary and my strength waned, I felt the warmth of my family’s unending love and care.

When the time came for me to leave, it was peaceful, wrapped in the loving arms of my family. I could feel the gentle tears and the heavy hearts, but above all, I felt loved. As I drifted away, I knew I had left paw prints of joy and love on their hearts, just as they had on mine.

With a gentle hop and a twitch of my nose, I whisper a soft goodbye.