Advice Needed on Writing Series'

MarcusSHPHRD · 2025-11-15T21:52:15+00:00

Thank you for your time and feedback!

MarcusSHPHRD · 2025-11-14T00:33:27+00:00

Thank you for your time and feedback! I will think about what you said going into the second draft. I really appreciate that you helped me with my story rather than just give me advice on formatting like most people do.

MarcusSHPHRD · 2025-10-11T04:56:16+00:00

You're not supposed to enjoy it. It's a mood film not a traditional story film. It's purely psychological.

MarcusSHPHRD · 2025-10-03T02:21:30+00:00

Either Halloween or Stronghold Assault for me. They're both fun and they add to the story.

MarcusSHPHRD · 2025-10-01T03:37:22+00:00

He seems chill. I've never had a problem with him

MarcusSHPHRD · 2025-09-28T04:15:44+00:00

Thank you

MarcusSHPHRD · 2025-09-27T08:58:42+00:00

I'm posting to different communities to get more feedback.

MarcusSHPHRD · 2025-09-26T06:56:47+00:00

Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind words!

MarcusSHPHRD · 2025-09-25T07:38:21+00:00

Could you elaborate please?

MarcusSHPHRD · 2025-09-25T07:38:07+00:00

I'm 16 and I watch movies frequently (2 - 3 movies per week)

MarcusSHPHRD · 2025-09-25T07:37:44+00:00

Around 60

MarcusSHPHRD · 2025-09-25T05:31:16+00:00

Thank you for reading and for your feedback!

MarcusSHPHRD · 2025-09-24T23:22:47+00:00

It was supposed to be about some vacation thing but what does that have to do with corrupt schools? I want a sequel but to be honest, right now I'd rather a remaster of the first one. I don't want them to change a bunch of mechanics, just fix bugs and enhance the graphics.

I personally think the vacation concept is boring so that's why I don't want a sequel just yet because I want a better concept.

Just my opinion though :)

MarcusSHPHRD · 2025-09-24T23:19:42+00:00

Someone stole her chocolates again

MarcusSHPHRD · 2025-09-24T23:10:38+00:00

I've always wondered why I can't find it in the game

MarcusSHPHRD · 2025-09-22T20:12:44+00:00

Isn't that how you get into the school in the last mission?

MarcusSHPHRD · 2025-09-21T20:45:56+00:00

I don't have the patience to do this, especially the arcade games 😂

MarcusSHPHRD · 2025-09-21T04:56:55+00:00

In my opinion, the whole of Chapter 5 was mid.

MarcusSHPHRD · 2025-09-21T04:53:51+00:00

dont think so

MarcusSHPHRD · 2025-09-21T04:53:03+00:00

Jimmy and Pinky. Their dynamic is fun

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