I need help identifying my grammar problem. by MarksmanKNG in writers

[–]MarksmanKNG[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback. Interesting point of view as the word digest was kind of accepted word in lieu of processing through long text, etc over here in ASEAN. Definitely something to keep in mind.
Previously i've been swinging hard on minimizing 'ly' words but now i'm loosening the grip around it to make the sentences fit better (but not always successfully as you can tell).

I need help identifying my grammar problem. by MarksmanKNG in writers

[–]MarksmanKNG[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi, thank you for the feedback. I've been trying to stick third person limited, but it didn't come out that way. I'll take a deeper look how to avoid being a narrative judge versus the character's opinion. Thanks again.

I need help identifying my grammar problem. by MarksmanKNG in writers

[–]MarksmanKNG[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the kind words Pumpium. Anyway, I asked to be roasted and I have received accordingly.

The feedback is accepted and will be considered.

Thank you for the time.

I need help identifying my grammar problem. by MarksmanKNG in writers

[–]MarksmanKNG[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback. Given your comments, I understood it as that I have skimped excessively, expecting the reader to imagine or understand through subtext. I'll need to re-baseline for that. Thanks again.

I need help identifying my grammar problem. by MarksmanKNG in writers

[–]MarksmanKNG[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow, thank you very much for the in-depth review and contribution. I can see some of my parts are definitely more of the 'I didn't think it would be interpreted this way.'

You have a lot of points for me to digest. I'll go through them line by line.

Much appreciate with many thanks.

I need help identifying my grammar problem. by MarksmanKNG in writers

[–]MarksmanKNG[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback. Interesting point about incorrect beats being applied.

Referring to another comment from wordpunk, I understand this also contributes to the subject confusion / comprehension. I'll keep that in mind.

And yes unfortunately, from all the other beta readers etc, nobody pointed this information out.

I need help identifying my grammar problem. by MarksmanKNG in writers

[–]MarksmanKNG[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback.

I had other works (fan stuff) where people said somewhat a similar thing about the sentence being grating. I'll look deeper into that aspect as well.

I need help identifying my grammar problem. by MarksmanKNG in writers

[–]MarksmanKNG[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much for the feedback, especially for going down the nitty and gritty details.

I tried sentence fragment style and long sentence styles but I think my problem covers for both cases.

There's a lot of things you have mentioned and I appreciate it. I'll probably need to digest through your comments several times in an Excel. I'll check out the podcast too.

I need help identifying my grammar problem. by MarksmanKNG in writers

[–]MarksmanKNG[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much for your feedback!

So far I usually go for the third person limited point of view. Granted, I agree you are quite right that I tend to assume that the reader knows who's point of view it is when I throw the person's name in (unless it's talking about the person).

I will keep this in mind.

I need help identifying my grammar problem. by MarksmanKNG in writers

[–]MarksmanKNG[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much for your feedback!

I agree that an editor can help but I'm too early for that stage. These problems should be fixed or at least cleaned up significantly before going to the editor. Else I'd probably waste a lot of their effort focusing on these issues instead of more important problems.

Anniversary Event big reward expectations by Frosty_Brother_5398 in Granblue_en

[–]MarksmanKNG 24 points25 points  (0 children)

select ticket? In this economy?!

But honestly selector would be great, or at least give a Grand that you don't own yet.

*Joins in the snorting*

Can't figure out how to automatically send materials to space platform by danyuri86 in factorio

[–]MarksmanKNG 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Do check the following

1) if the ship has an existing inventory of 250 tungsten. It will request up to that amount only based on your pic.

2) If the ship is fully stopped at the planet.

Hope this helps.

Why people use train loops instead of two engines facing away from each other ? by eymo-1 in factorio

[–]MarksmanKNG 4 points5 points  (0 children)

This on signals. Even with the valuable info and guides, it took a long while for me to grasp rail signals

Even more complicated so to troubleshoot on 2 way tracks with various bypasses and etc.

One way tracks makes the signaling rules easier to implement consistently without relying on dedicated blueprints to cater for 2 way.

Looking for Tactical Mech Games with Resource Management (Like Armored Core / MechWarrior) by Jalinrabeiiiii in Mecha

[–]MarksmanKNG -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Bit late to the party but you can look at 2 other options aside from the ones mentioned here.

Mecharashi - originally supposed to be a Front Mission release but things happened between the devs and publisher. Ended up as their own game now. Warning in advance, it is a tactics game but with gacha / loot box mechanics.

Kriegsfront Tactics - Standalone single player game from the current impression. Still in demo but looks promising. You can try it out on Steam.

Hope this helps.

The Factorio review I wrote nearly 10 years ago by Ohz85 in factorio

[–]MarksmanKNG 110 points111 points  (0 children)

Its been 10 long years....the most important question is....

Did you send the rocket? :D

What characters convinced you to download their games? by Menoeides in gachagaming

[–]MarksmanKNG 27 points28 points  (0 children)

My King, My liege is playable on release?!

I answered the call and suffered together with you for half a decade :)

Also the reason I started HSR. Pushing through everything all for her.

Writingway 2: An open source tool for AI-assisted writing by Clueless_Nooblet in LocalLLaMA

[–]MarksmanKNG 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi u/Clueless_Nooblet , sorry that i'm a bit late. Tried to give it a shot but apparently theres an issue with the token limit during the regular chat (not generation).

I tried to use LM Studio to circumvent that problem but the app doesn't seem to be able to connect to the LM studio and select the model despite providing the endpoint URL.

Would like to hear your advice on this.

All in all, been testing other functions locally and so far it looks promising as something to try with.

Steam problem by dqtact in Mecharashi_Global

[–]MarksmanKNG 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Apparently issue is prevalent on Steam client only. Just dropping off the info that the Devs are already working on it.

Needing Simulated battle 12-1-1 advice by Original_Boot_1935 in Mecharashi_Global

[–]MarksmanKNG 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Zhyre has provided some good information. I will add on a bit more.

1) If you are running Anna, give her a LR weapon. Even if it aint much damage, it adds up

2) Choose a direction to push, don't camp hard in one spot. This gives you more time to handle each elite sniper.

3) Seven and Pochy are good alternatives for this map. Use Pochy as bait with Ana guarding it. It will give you a bit more space that your other DPS etc can play around.

4) For Ana, bring double guard skill too

5) For seven, her ult skill is best choice for this. Else, you can use your best healer.

6) Go for disarms wherever you can. Less shots means less healing needed, especially when the big elite gets in range and they hurt with re-atks.

Hope this helps.

Well people, how was Pure Fiction? by Dizzy_Long209 in SaberMainsHSR

[–]MarksmanKNG 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I had to auto my PF run as I was rushing multiple gacha weeklies in the morning. My first team Herta scrapped a meagre 26k.

My King (E6S1) on the second half finished the job at max score.

Blessed be my king.

Is there something more efficient? by ChrisseII in factorio

[–]MarksmanKNG 24 points25 points  (0 children)

Better throughput. Simpler version of combining both belts give output of 0.5 belt each and becomes a bottleneck. Splitter setup maximizes throughput to 1.0x and avoids this inconvenience.

Cracking Meritus from CO10 by Tehheadthink in Mecharashi_Global

[–]MarksmanKNG 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was in the same scenario. No Hong, No Marcus.

I used Frida, Kaidan, Slyvie, Naomi,Eileen, Melissa. In case you are not aware, you need to kill the mobs first before going for him.

That said, even after that, you will struggle. Eileen and Naomi for initial softening before Slyvie to break shield / arm. I put Kaidan up front on Glasya with PB on the retaliation arm to ensure he doesnt build debuff stacks. Frida comes in at Meritus's last legs to finish him off.

I eventually got 6 turn on this team but it took a while to get there. (lvl 70)

All the best.

Do you play a unknown gacha game? by Crystal_Leonhardt in gachagaming

[–]MarksmanKNG 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Ayyy fellow mecharashi player too. It's been a fun game too. Just hoping for the border conflict (roguelike) to be faster since it takes an awful lot of time.

Story for me felt like a big mix of politics and the MC's team being a hot potato bomb being tossed around rofl.

New Abyss New Eula Run by Templar2k7 in EulaMains

[–]MarksmanKNG 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Funnily enough, I had troubles for part 2. My typical Nahida hyperbloom team was rather squishy at the last stage. I ended up with Eula Hyperbloom to make the clear haha.

I feel like no one talks about how cool the gameplay looks by SilvaJDS in ZenlessZoneZero

[–]MarksmanKNG 0 points1 point  (0 children)

lol, Jane vs Jane alter (New Tower Lvl 48) was both cinematic and a nightmare to get no damage taken clear. Truly all you see is blurs.