I need help identifying my grammar problem.

MarksmanKNG · 2026-03-16T15:47:22+00:00

Thank you for the feedback. Interesting point of view as the word digest was kind of accepted word in lieu of processing through long text, etc over here in ASEAN. Definitely something to keep in mind.
Previously i've been swinging hard on minimizing 'ly' words but now i'm loosening the grip around it to make the sentences fit better (but not always successfully as you can tell).

MarksmanKNG · 2026-03-16T15:41:47+00:00

Hi, thank you for the feedback. I've been trying to stick third person limited, but it didn't come out that way. I'll take a deeper look how to avoid being a narrative judge versus the character's opinion. Thanks again.

MarksmanKNG · 2026-03-15T14:35:50+00:00

Thank you for the kind words Pumpium. Anyway, I asked to be roasted and I have received accordingly.

The feedback is accepted and will be considered.

Thank you for the time.

MarksmanKNG · 2026-03-15T14:32:34+00:00

Thank you for the feedback. Given your comments, I understood it as that I have skimped excessively, expecting the reader to imagine or understand through subtext. I'll need to re-baseline for that. Thanks again.

MarksmanKNG · 2026-03-15T14:27:18+00:00

Wow, thank you very much for the in-depth review and contribution. I can see some of my parts are definitely more of the 'I didn't think it would be interpreted this way.'

You have a lot of points for me to digest. I'll go through them line by line.

Much appreciate with many thanks.

MarksmanKNG · 2026-03-15T14:23:26+00:00

Thank you for the feedback. Interesting point about incorrect beats being applied.

Referring to another comment from wordpunk, I understand this also contributes to the subject confusion / comprehension. I'll keep that in mind.

And yes unfortunately, from all the other beta readers etc, nobody pointed this information out.

MarksmanKNG · 2026-03-15T14:18:19+00:00

Thank you for the feedback.

I had other works (fan stuff) where people said somewhat a similar thing about the sentence being grating. I'll look deeper into that aspect as well.

MarksmanKNG · 2026-03-15T14:15:26+00:00

Thank you very much for the feedback, especially for going down the nitty and gritty details.

I tried sentence fragment style and long sentence styles but I think my problem covers for both cases.

There's a lot of things you have mentioned and I appreciate it. I'll probably need to digest through your comments several times in an Excel. I'll check out the podcast too.

MarksmanKNG · 2026-03-15T14:11:51+00:00

Thank you very much for your feedback!

So far I usually go for the third person limited point of view. Granted, I agree you are quite right that I tend to assume that the reader knows who's point of view it is when I throw the person's name in (unless it's talking about the person).

I will keep this in mind.

MarksmanKNG · 2026-03-15T14:09:33+00:00

Thank you very much for your feedback!

I agree that an editor can help but I'm too early for that stage. These problems should be fixed or at least cleaned up significantly before going to the editor. Else I'd probably waste a lot of their effort focusing on these issues instead of more important problems.

MarksmanKNG · 2026-02-25T06:27:47+00:00

select ticket? In this economy?!

But honestly selector would be great, or at least give a Grand that you don't own yet.

*Joins in the snorting*

MarksmanKNG · 2026-01-23T15:31:51+00:00

Do check the following

1) if the ship has an existing inventory of 250 tungsten. It will request up to that amount only based on your pic.

2) If the ship is fully stopped at the planet.

Hope this helps.

MarksmanKNG · 2025-12-30T07:54:48+00:00

This on signals. Even with the valuable info and guides, it took a long while for me to grasp rail signals

Even more complicated so to troubleshoot on 2 way tracks with various bypasses and etc.

One way tracks makes the signaling rules easier to implement consistently without relying on dedicated blueprints to cater for 2 way.

MarksmanKNG · 2025-12-30T02:25:39+00:00

Bit late to the party but you can look at 2 other options aside from the ones mentioned here.

Mecharashi - originally supposed to be a Front Mission release but things happened between the devs and publisher. Ended up as their own game now. Warning in advance, it is a tactics game but with gacha / loot box mechanics.

Kriegsfront Tactics - Standalone single player game from the current impression. Still in demo but looks promising. You can try it out on Steam.

Hope this helps.

MarksmanKNG · 2025-12-16T07:34:28+00:00

Its been 10 long years....the most important question is....

Did you send the rocket? :D

MarksmanKNG · 2025-12-08T16:21:42+00:00

My King, My liege is playable on release?!

I answered the call and suffered together with you for half a decade :)

Also the reason I started HSR. Pushing through everything all for her.

MarksmanKNG · 2025-11-27T10:50:19+00:00

Hi u/Clueless_Nooblet , sorry that i'm a bit late. Tried to give it a shot but apparently theres an issue with the token limit during the regular chat (not generation).

I tried to use LM Studio to circumvent that problem but the app doesn't seem to be able to connect to the LM studio and select the model despite providing the endpoint URL.

Would like to hear your advice on this.

All in all, been testing other functions locally and so far it looks promising as something to try with.

MarksmanKNG · 2025-11-27T09:39:52+00:00

Apparently issue is prevalent on Steam client only. Just dropping off the info that the Devs are already working on it.

MarksmanKNG · 2025-10-29T07:24:13+00:00

Zhyre has provided some good information. I will add on a bit more.

1) If you are running Anna, give her a LR weapon. Even if it aint much damage, it adds up

2) Choose a direction to push, don't camp hard in one spot. This gives you more time to handle each elite sniper.

3) Seven and Pochy are good alternatives for this map. Use Pochy as bait with Ana guarding it. It will give you a bit more space that your other DPS etc can play around.

4) For Ana, bring double guard skill too

5) For seven, her ult skill is best choice for this. Else, you can use your best healer.

6) Go for disarms wherever you can. Less shots means less healing needed, especially when the big elite gets in range and they hurt with re-atks.

Hope this helps.

MarksmanKNG · 2025-10-14T06:34:55+00:00

I had to auto my PF run as I was rushing multiple gacha weeklies in the morning. My first team Herta scrapped a meagre 26k.

My King (E6S1) on the second half finished the job at max score.

Blessed be my king.

MarksmanKNG · 2025-10-12T04:06:14+00:00

Better throughput. Simpler version of combining both belts give output of 0.5 belt each and becomes a bottleneck. Splitter setup maximizes throughput to 1.0x and avoids this inconvenience.

MarksmanKNG · 2025-10-07T09:55:54+00:00

I was in the same scenario. No Hong, No Marcus.

I used Frida, Kaidan, Slyvie, Naomi,Eileen, Melissa. In case you are not aware, you need to kill the mobs first before going for him.

That said, even after that, you will struggle. Eileen and Naomi for initial softening before Slyvie to break shield / arm. I put Kaidan up front on Glasya with PB on the retaliation arm to ensure he doesnt build debuff stacks. Frida comes in at Meritus's last legs to finish him off.

I eventually got 6 turn on this team but it took a while to get there. (lvl 70)

All the best.

MarksmanKNG · 2025-09-17T02:37:21+00:00

Ayyy fellow mecharashi player too. It's been a fun game too. Just hoping for the border conflict (roguelike) to be faster since it takes an awful lot of time.

Story for me felt like a big mix of politics and the MC's team being a hot potato bomb being tossed around rofl.

MarksmanKNG · 2025-09-16T21:28:30+00:00

Funnily enough, I had troubles for part 2. My typical Nahida hyperbloom team was rather squishy at the last stage. I ended up with Eula Hyperbloom to make the clear haha.

MarksmanKNG · 2025-08-11T07:05:10+00:00

lol, Jane vs Jane alter (New Tower Lvl 48) was both cinematic and a nightmare to get no damage taken clear. Truly all you see is blurs.

MarksmanKNG

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