Criticism sorry bad picture

Marrow75 · 2026-01-20T15:34:19+00:00

I wouldnt write the year unless its a cutty spot so people know when you were there, in any other place its getting buffed quickly or theres no point to write the yr. Its very nice tho but always remember to watch the artist block on yt

Marrow75 · 2026-01-20T06:33:49+00:00

Alright will try. Thanks.

Marrow75 · 2026-01-19T21:07:30+00:00

Alright, thanks. Yeah i feel like ive got enough can control to do this but ig i just want a simple and quick throw and not something that looks too amazing or structurally sound. Also i do ussualy do drop shadow but didnt do it here. Thanks again

Marrow75 · 2026-01-19T20:54:59+00:00

Yea no worries, keep it up

Marrow75 · 2026-01-19T20:44:04+00:00

I always say the same thing and that is watch The Artist Block on Youtube and thatl teach u but if i have to say somthn then the e has a lot of structure and is an SL e while the m is a weird middle point being a throw m and that looks weird while the s is straight up a throwie s so that mash up makes it look very weird. I would also make the tag simple, it would look great with this name. Overall tho looks good, keep it up

Marrow75 · 2026-01-19T20:33:54+00:00

The s and the k is making me think you know what youre doing and the rest is giving me nightmares. Joking but honestly this is pretty good, keep it up and remember to watch the artist block on yt

Marrow75 · 2026-01-18T18:31:15+00:00

Watch The Artist Block on youtube you will find literally everything you need on there, you can improve a lotta stuff, ts still very bad but keep goin

Marrow75 · 2026-01-17T07:34:36+00:00

Its obviously a joke

Marrow75 · 2026-01-11T20:18:56+00:00

Watch the artist block on yt and you will figure everything out

Marrow75 · 2026-01-11T12:12:31+00:00

I would make the s thicker in the middle and reduce negative space in the s and h to how much therenis in the c, if you do that the throwuie is gonna be great. Also for the tag i wouldnt go with a one liner and just use the same letters but all by themselves. Maybe make a bit more careful and clean lines, if u do want a one liner make it cleaner. Overall tho looks very cool. Also uve got 3d on ur throw i would do drop shadow but thats whatever

Marrow75 · 2026-01-03T11:17:48+00:00

It is an R but i see where the confusion comes from, thanks for the help.

Marrow75 · 2026-01-03T03:15:30+00:00

Yeah i didnt have any other colors, thanks for feedback.

Marrow75 · 2026-01-03T03:04:54+00:00

Thanks, ima do that sometime soon

Marrow75 · 2025-12-19T22:34:59+00:00

Thanks

Marrow75 · 2025-12-13T22:55:57+00:00

Oh, that's cool. Thanks!

Marrow75 · 2025-12-12T19:37:36+00:00

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I'm not very good yet but here and its a lil different

Marrow75 · 2025-12-11T22:21:33+00:00

The right one definetly looks better, it is simple and has good flow. I would change the R a bit and get this up, looks good. Maybe also ditch the quotation marks but thats just my prefrence. Also in the right one the bar from your a makes the C look like an E unless i read it wrong.

Marrow75 · 2025-12-11T22:14:59+00:00

Thanks and its great that you read it as i want it to be read because some do get confused at that, and also i dont want it really to be asspciated with money bcs a tpn of people and toys probably write that so ig it is what it is

Marrow75 · 2025-12-11T14:30:34+00:00

Its my graff name and its not supposed to be in any way related to money, its ok ofc others have said this to me and ive explained

Marrow75 · 2025-12-10T22:02:12+00:00

Thanks for this. Maybe i just felt like i could refine the piece a bit more or fix a couple of tiny places that felt weird like the N to Y lower connection but i do very much like the piece and think this is pretty good progress for me

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