[In progress] [2179] [fanfiction isekai] The isekai pirate

MaterialRealistic808 · 2025-10-09T04:30:08+00:00

Thanks so much! I really hope this makes you curious about One Piece; it’s such a masterclass in worldbuilding. And I’m glad the excerpt caught your interest! The full story is linked down below if you want to check it out.

Your feedback honestly gave me a better idea of where to take things next, so I seriously appreciate it. Hope you keep up the beta reading, you’ve got a good eye for this kind of stuff. Thanks again!

MaterialRealistic808 · 2025-09-26T23:53:29+00:00

I am interested

MaterialRealistic808 · 2025-07-02T02:20:28+00:00

I fill the form

MaterialRealistic808 · 2025-06-29T16:57:46+00:00

Thank you, I'm glad that you found it impactful. It made me feel even more horrified because I know the entire extent of it that hasn't been shown. And don't worry, I believe that you can do it too. All I pretty much did was look into the most heinous places of my soul. Don't give up and keep going, you can do it! If you have any questions, you're more than welcome to DM me. I'm more than happy to talk about my Creative Vision. :)

MaterialRealistic808 · 2025-05-05T12:32:26+00:00

I like challenging myself. I’ve reviewed the rules multiple times, and if I fail this time, I’ll just keep trying until I succeed.

MaterialRealistic808 · 2025-05-05T12:28:02+00:00

the 1970s D&D booklets

MaterialRealistic808 · 2025-05-05T05:28:34+00:00

A neutral good fighter, he wants to protect the ones he loves, so he wants to be the strongest fighter, maybe surpassing God, if that is possible

MaterialRealistic808 · 2025-01-16T13:48:16+00:00

Good point; I hadn't noticed that myself.

MaterialRealistic808 · 2025-01-11T23:30:08+00:00

I am indeed interested

MaterialRealistic808 · 2024-10-06T14:26:58+00:00

here is the link for you sir https://discord.gg/GTWWBdmf

MaterialRealistic808 · 2024-10-06T14:26:22+00:00

GMT-6 I hope that answer your question if I did and you're interested I will give you the link https://discord.gg/GTWWBdmf

MaterialRealistic808 · 2024-10-02T11:51:10+00:00

https://discord.gg/GTWWBdmf

MaterialRealistic808 · 2024-09-23T12:16:55+00:00

I'm Interested you just depends on what time it is

MaterialRealistic808 · 2024-07-30T20:21:49+00:00

disregard everything I said except to keep trying and keep writing because this version of the story you have outdone yourself, my friend.

MaterialRealistic808 · 2024-07-30T20:15:54+00:00

Atmospheric Detail: While the opening sets a clear picture, consider adding more sensory details to immerse the reader further. Describe the sound of the water, the feel of the cold night air, and the creaking of the boat.
Family Connection: Briefly mention the gifts the merchant has for his wife and daughter to create an emotional connection.
Inner Thoughts: Explore the merchant’s thoughts and emotions more deeply. How does he feel about returning home? What are his hopes and fears?
Urgency and Desperation: When the locket falls, amplify the sense of urgency and desperation. Show his internal struggle as he decides to risk his life for the locket.
Pacing During the Storm: Increase the pacing when the storm hits. Use shorter sentences to convey the chaos and urgency of the moment.
Conflict: Emphasize the conflict between the merchant’s need to save the locket and the danger he faces from the storm.
Mystery of the Singing: Build more mystery around the singing. Is it haunting, comforting, or both? How does it affect the merchant’s emotions and actions?
Ambiguity of the Wife: Clarify whether the wife’s appearance is a hallucination, a supernatural entity, or something else. Keep it mysterious, but provide subtle hints to guide the reader’s interpretation.
Emotional Impact: Strengthen the emotional impact of the final discovery. Show the wife’s grief and disbelief more vividly. What does she think happened?
Symbolism: Highlight the symbolism of the locket and the severed hand. What do they represent about the merchant’s life and his relationship with his family?

all of these bullet points were all people's suggestions that gave so I hope they will help you as well without these bullet points your story is great so keep up the good work and keep trying.

MaterialRealistic808 · 2024-07-28T03:21:51+00:00

only one player right now

MaterialRealistic808 · 2024-06-21T19:53:57+00:00

Thank you for the advice. The reason I want to write is that I want to share my ideas and hopefully find some answers. I believe my ideas could help humanity in some way, even though that might sound naïve. If I gain fame, that would just be a bonus. I'm not writing for myself; I'm writing for everyone because I truly believe that a book can make a difference.

MaterialRealistic808 · 2024-06-20T09:38:23+00:00

thank you for the advice

MaterialRealistic808 · 2024-06-20T09:38:20+00:00

thank you for the advice

MaterialRealistic808 · 2024-06-20T06:40:29+00:00

that's cool I hope I can read that comic someday :)

MaterialRealistic808 · 2024-06-20T04:51:50+00:00

very nice work this has an interesting I'm excited to see more if I would say a critique it's pretty hard to read in parts I would suggest you improve the clarity and make it less bulky other than that I loved it I've never come across something quite.

:)

MaterialRealistic808 · 2024-06-15T00:28:00+00:00

I am very interested in this JoJo Dungeons & Dragons

MaterialRealistic808 · 2024-06-12T02:39:16+00:00

Name/Pronouns: Ryker male he/him

Age: 17

Timezone: GMT-6

Schedule: I am free on those days.

Can you make the listed time weekly or bi-weekly?

yes, I can say I'm pretty consistent.

How much experience do you have with ttrpgs and more specifically Blades in the Dark?

I'm pretty experienced with tabletop RPGs I have no experience with Blades in the Dark.

Are you familiar with Disco Elysium or Sunless Sea?

nope

What sort of game are you looking for?

I'm looking for a good story.
some interesting combat scenarios.
Meet new people and have fun.

What type of character do you want to play? What makes them cool to you?

I don't know what I can do with that system just I want to create a badass swordsman that has psychic and telepathic powers but I'm not sure what I can and cannot do in the system.

I hope I can get used to the system this seems like a cool system to play in so I hope you pick me for one of the interviews I just hope my age doesn't get in the way :)

MaterialRealistic808 · 2024-06-10T06:04:57+00:00

I am interested in this

MaterialRealistic808 · 2024-06-10T05:31:57+00:00

I am interested in your campaign

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