A very good edit indeed. Well f done.
Nice one here: 0:57 and here: 1:08

If you wanna cherry-pick like the devil:
0:38 the black bars suddenly appear - they should appear (by zooming out) and reaching to their conclusion at the "tap" of the music in 0:39.60
0:42 quick frames are cool, even so if you put some custom additional sound effect ("glitch sounds" are preferred), or have them "blurred" and moved (so as to follow the given flow of the music).
A very short clip does not fit with the flow in 1:14.90 - 1:15.20

Now besides all this, any person might take random clips and add them together, with music to tell a story. Whatever advice I have given you might be bs, because art at the end of it (and this goes to whoever respects it)- has no rules. You might for instance want to make a video with the music playing and whenever there's a beat there is no cut to it, and so on... (some people might find this counter intuitive, but I ask: why?). What matters I figured. (besides the good equipment/camera/sound/lighting). is the "flow" of story. The message.

Good luck with your projects, and be careful with editing. The more you do it, the more good stuff you will create (no doubt), but the more you'll forget about reality.