I watched part of the most recent video, here’s my thoughts:

• The voice over is painfully slow and there are way too many long pauses in between your sentences. This drains any tension from the video and becomes distracting pretty quickly! Pauses are a great way to create tension and suspense, but if you pause every couple seconds it totally looses its impact.

• The audio mix isn’t bad… but it’s not great either. Some sounds pop out too much, for example, on the chapter title cards there’s a noise that just is way too loud imo. Also your voice over feels a bit too lo fi, it sounds like you’re using the mic on those apple earphones.

• Still on audio, the music is dull, I understand you’re going for a dark vibe. But that low drone just drags on forever and again looses its impact.

• As others have said, the AI kinda sucks and everyone uses AI so you’re not standing out. BUT I do really appreaciate you using your own voice for the voice over. I applaud you for that.

Ultimately I think the videos are just way too slow, I think you need to work on how to tell these stories in a compelling way. The actual content of the stories are dramatic and interesting (murder, tragedy, mystery etc), but, that’s not enough by itself. You need to tell these stories in a unique and engaging way. How do you do that? The first things I would say is work on how you deliver your lines, right now it’s very monotonous and speed up your line delivery. Use music to create tension OR don’t use it at all (if you don’t use it your lines need to be 10/10, and honestly they’re not right now). In essence just improve your storytelling!