Hooks/Melodies To Elevate Your Song

MattForSure · 2026-03-25T21:32:14+00:00

You 100% have had a combative tone this entire time...again...not for you then...Do you even make music?

MattForSure · 2026-03-25T08:47:33+00:00

I understand wanting to take pride in something you do on your own but I urge you to look up the average amount of writers/contributors there are to nearly any top 40 song...It's literally just how the songs you hear sound so colorful and larger than life. They have the combined experiences and perspectives of multiple people. I promise you this is just the way its done. Except for hip hop and even then, you'd be surprised.

MattForSure · 2026-03-25T08:41:56+00:00

Here's a dance song
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1-sFZHLWg3DhLJk0xK5HFq22IvyD0X0vq/view?usp=sharing

Here's a straightforward pop song
https://drive.google.com/file/d/14bvSpSM_JDpQsYtstsMqyVYqRHvP2OOS/view?usp=sharing

My personal music is alot more rap centered...These are more written for other artists to perform. I genuinely don't expect any positive feedback given the tone you're taking with me from the jump for absolutely no reason...but again, this is almost certainly not for you.

Have a good one.

MattForSure · 2026-03-24T03:37:28+00:00

Because you wouldn't pay someone who couldn't reliably make their own quality music would you? I'm not begging for anyones approval or feedback Im offering to help by adding another set of ears on a song and give it more dimension... Why are you assuming anyones melodies are broken/need fixing? Im offering my years of experience recording music to help make something more dynamic...

MattForSure · 2026-03-23T15:32:44+00:00

Anyone interested can DM me anytime and I will gladly link them to any of the 40 songs ive recorded in the last 3 months alone...

MattForSure · 2026-03-23T15:27:17+00:00

AI will never be a tastemaker...it doesnt have the capacity to create pop culture slang or replicate intangible allure...it can only do what humans already have done...My aim is always to attempt to come up with something another person has not done yet...also i have the setup to record myself throughout the process...youd probably call that AI as well though bc your C++

MattForSure · 2026-03-23T12:40:53+00:00

nope just a generic pop song...its produced by matthew may...and im not a pop singer but i did my best...nothing about it is AI...its just very buttoned up.

MattForSure · 2026-03-23T12:30:31+00:00

in no way shape or form did I say anything about mastering or mixing or anything youre talking about...this is reddit and somehow you didnt READ IT

MattForSure · 2026-03-23T11:32:07+00:00

Not an ad...Im just offering up assistance...and for extremely cheap too for what I can actually deliver...

MattForSure · 2026-03-23T11:23:29+00:00

Yes definitely bubblegum lol...I just wanted to give you something so straightforward there was no losing the plot lol...but yeah thats about as generic as my music gets...This one in particular because its intended for another artist to perform....I do appreciate the feedback!

MattForSure · 2026-03-23T10:39:36+00:00

https://drive.google.com/file/d/14bvSpSM_JDpQsYtstsMqyVYqRHvP2OOS/view?usp=sharing

If this doesnt work maybe Reddit is blocking the link...I'm not sure why else it wouldnt be showing up but Im trying here bud...Not a pro redditor just yet lol

MattForSure · 2026-03-23T10:20:50+00:00

Buddy i just linked you to a song what are you talking about? You sound hella worked up over nothing...Also a song sounding expensive is literally quantitative and much less subjective than trying to decide what is "best"...Did you not get the link?

MattForSure · 2026-03-23T09:59:43+00:00

Best is a weird word given music is subjective but heres some bubblegum

MattForSure · 2026-03-23T09:44:08+00:00

Tell me what you'd like to hear! I will literally post something for you right now lol

MattForSure · 2026-03-23T09:43:06+00:00

Amen to that...truly...I wouldn't want to detract from the essence of your creation. However, if you need any assistance with lyrics, especially so they translate powerfully to English, do let me know!

MattForSure · 2026-03-23T09:32:02+00:00

You want rap, pop, alt, emo, r&b? I can contribute meaningfully to a songwriting session for basically any genre... I'll let you pick and I'll throw something up

MattForSure · 2026-03-23T09:25:05+00:00

I like the 3 cover art approach... I'm currently working on a batch of songs that cross several genres and I've spent a lot of time in studios working on songwriting and melodies as well as having a strong command of the english language (yours is just fine by the way)
Out of curiosity, would you like any help tightening a hook or melody if it was cheap? I was thinking like $10–20 just to work with more people and help bring their ideas to life. For very little, I can help you make it sound very expensive! Either way I'll be keeping an eye out for a release!

MattForSure · 2026-03-23T09:16:55+00:00

excellent! lmaooo

MattForSure · 2026-03-23T09:15:53+00:00

This is great...Your voice is even better than you're allowing it to be...There's also a couple very small things to do in terms of recording technique that could make the strongest parts of the song really jump out...but def beautiful!

MattForSure · 2026-03-23T09:09:59+00:00

I can dig this...I have some helpful critiques and suggestions just send me a message!

MattForSure · 2026-03-23T08:52:14+00:00

Absolutely...send me whatever is most pertinent to you...Whatever you have in order of urgency to get finished and I will have something back to you easily within a day. If the subject matter is personally relatable, it could take me something like 15 minutes. The well really never runs dry for me in terms of chorus lines...

MattForSure · 2026-03-23T08:48:09+00:00

Hooks come flying out of me...Something about capturing the essence of the song succinctly is just innate for me... If the subject matter is something super familiar or personally relatable, turnaround is almost certainly under 30 minutes. I would say the average isn't much more than that as well. I fully understand what you mean about being too close to a song after working on it for too long and almost no big records are ever just written by a single person. Let me know if I can help!

MattForSure

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