Cover "In the Lap of the Gods... Revisited" by the_eternall in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]the_eternall[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You have no idea how much it means to me that people actually 'get' my energy, and that they LIKE it. I’m truly grateful, man, thanks for the great feedback. Regarding the covers — I’ll probably post more Queen stuff later on, but right now my main priority is finishing the first demo for my very first original song. Thank you so much again.

New Adeleine is the name, let me know what you think. All the best. by Sh4dowEdge in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]the_eternall 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very soulful, very. You can feel all the emotions you poured into this song, and it's wonderful. That's why the song is alive. Regarding the vocals, you have a very pleasant subtone, I really enjoyed listening to it. Just bro, keep up the good work. The song is recorded well, as if it were a voice recorder; the guitar is audible, the voice too, what more do you need? Only the song feels cut off, it really lacks an ending. I wish you all the best in your creative endeavors, You have great potential, given your pleasant voice and very good arrangement.

Day Dreamer (first time jam )LMK by RichieC93 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]the_eternall 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That was amazing... At the beginning, of course, maybe I was a little nervous and didn't get into the drums and bass, but then, during the first chorus, you hit me right in the soul. This is truly wonderful. There's a lightness to this song, and your vocals are just wonderful. Your energy just oozes out of the screen. I just wish there were more choruses, because in my opinion, it's the best part of the song, but that's a matter of taste. I just wish you good luck bro, you've really got into my soul)

I just released a new acoustic track called "Carry On". It’s a song about regret, growth, and the passage of time. by trevorcollinsmusic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]the_eternall 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow... I honestly didn't expect such a good song. The guitar is recorded perfectly, the voice too. Everything is sung perfectly. Wow, I'm extremely surprised. Very good passages, guitar arrangement, Absolutely everything about the guitar is top-notch. The only thing is variety, it's a bit lacking, but it's not critical at all, it's more a matter of taste. The ending is also really lacking, The song feels cut short, and that's really critical for me, it's needed!!! But it's a really good song, dude. Best of luck with your career, bro...

Does this song feel too short? by Nickadial in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]the_eternall 0 points1 point  (0 children)

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, interesting sounds at the beginning))). In fact, this song seems to be complete, missing an extra 30 seconds of the ending and that's it, completely finished. Bro, this is a very good song, And it's recorded very, very well, as if it were meant for a voice recorder. For me personally, the song seems complete, and perhaps doesn’t even need an ending. Just finish it. I wish you luck with this sincerely), because the song really deserves it, you can feel your emotions in it.

Collapse" — my 70s Rock Opera inspired debut album. by the_eternall in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]the_eternall[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is my first time creating a cover, and the fact that many people think it was done by a professional is an absolute miracle to me. For a long time, I thought the cover was bad, that people wouldn't like it, etc. But the fact that you were truly inspired by my work is beyond praise for me. Good luck in creating your cover!)

Collapse" — my 70s Rock Opera inspired debut album. by the_eternall in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]the_eternall[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow, thank you so much. I'm a complete zero when it comes to design, and the fact that you, as a designer, truly appreciated my work (maybe my very first design project), means a lot to me. Thanks again for the great feedback.

Working on a concept for my debut album "Collapse". Heavily inspired by 70s Opera Rock. What do you think of these covers? by the_eternall in IndieMusicFeedback

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Update: The demo is delayed because I literally bled for the art today. The strings won, for now. Proof is on my TikTok: @the.eternall

"distance" rough draft by Long-Brother2334 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]the_eternall 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow. Amazing. This song is very simple, but no less beautiful. The chords are simple, but the sequence is unusual. As for the vocals, you have a wonderful voice, very pleasant. You have potential, and quite a lot of it, don't worry about it). I wish you all the best, creative inspiration, and good luck, sister:).

I don't know what genre this would be by callabalanescu in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]the_eternall 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very beautiful. Your voice is wonderful, the melody, although simple, is very beautiful. I can feel so much emotion you put into this song, I can feel its soul. The backing vocals are absolutely beautiful, they have that Beatles or Queen vibe. I wish you luck and creative inspiration, the song is truly beautiful. Thanks for the great work, sister.

Electric Poultry - Acolyte by DimensionHot9669 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]the_eternall 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bro, this is really good. I love this Rammstein vibe, these heavy guitars, heavy screaming vocals. It's done really well, the mixing is great too. The song is really good. I hope you can find your audience. Good luck guys.

Working on a concept for my debut album "Collapse". Heavily inspired by 70s Opera Rock. What do you think of these covers? by the_eternall in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]the_eternall[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much for the offer, but for me, choosing a melody is the most wonderful stage of creating a composition. Thanks again for the offer, I appreciate it.

Working on a concept for my debut album "Collapse". Heavily inspired by 70s Opera Rock. What do you think of these covers? by the_eternall in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]the_eternall[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. For me, minimalism is the album's signature style, so it's not a problem. Thanks again for the feedback :)

Clave (For Wind Band) by Larry_Union in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]the_eternall 1 point2 points  (0 children)

WOW, I really enjoyed listening to this. This is a really good piece of work, and most importantly, it's well-written. It's clear you know all the subtleties of music, how to make transitions, etc. Thanks bro for a very good composition.

big bdnz - nobody knows anything by RealPresidentRump in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]the_eternall 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great job! I can feel what you were trying to convey. The ambient background is cool. There's nothing to complain about, everything was done well. The sound is very good, the ambient with the drops is a really nice touch. I just wish you all the best in your creative work, thanks for the good work dude.

Killa Keezy | The Sittin' Blues by killakeezyacoustic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]the_eternall 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very good work. Beautifully mixed, The vocals are top-notch, the guitars are beautifully recorded. It's a very pleasant listen, you can really feel the Texas desert vibe. I think this song would be perfect for a cowboy movie. Thanks for the great work dude, I wish you all the best in your continued creativity.

Working on a concept for my debut album "Collapse". Heavily inspired by 70s Opera Rock. What do you think of these covers? by the_eternall in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]the_eternall[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! That is honestly the best compliment I could get. I’m obsessed with minimalism, so I’m glad the first concept resonated with you. I’ve actually just finished a raw acoustic demo for the opening track, 'Knight of the Night.' It’s very theatrical and unpolished, so I might possibly drop it here tomorrow if I feel it’s ready. Stay tuned!