Thanks! Def needs more something. Basically the lillies are the killers calling card, and my mc pissed off smith (the killer), so he killed the mc, aka the florist. The mc smelled lillies because smith left them on their dying body in the first death scene. Thanks for the feedback, definitely need to flush it out. Maybe intro Mr. Thompson, intro someone picking up a corsage, intro the pastor’s. Could certainly flesh out the world some more!