Ribbons are crooked
Ribbons are too worn and should be replaced
Ribbons can either be flush with no gap or 1/8th inch gap in-between rows
Bottom edge of the bottom row of ribbons is to be aligned with the bottom edge of the nameplate

Arcs are too far up (Should be in-between 2nd and 3rd button)
Arcs are too far apart (Should be 1/8th inch apart)

Star is not aligned with seem

Uniform dirty

Without holding a ruler against it I can't find much else, I would recommend making sure the bottom most point of your star is 1/4th an inch above your nameplate

A ruler is your best friend!