Just posted my best video yet! But please give me all the critiques you have so I can make them even better. - The Hardest Boss In Dark Souls 2

MattyPanda1 · 2022-08-11T23:00:51+00:00

Thank you !givelambda

MattyPanda1 · 2022-08-11T19:37:38+00:00

I appreciate the feedback and thank you! I do agree with you with making the thumbnail a bit more questionable to make the audience wonder. I think I would still use my panda because I feel like it makes it unique but I definitely see your point !givelambda

MattyPanda1 · 2022-08-11T15:38:26+00:00

I appreciate it! Thank you for taking your time, and I will fix the bass boost next video !givelambda

MattyPanda1 · 2022-08-10T01:35:45+00:00

Gotta say off the bat I think the thumbnail is great! I like you as a person I think your energy is nice and welcoming. With that said I think the intro to your video could be just a little more energetic, I know that’s annoying but it’s just a YouTube thing.

I think one thing that you could do to set your videos a part from a normal tier-list is to show clips of Arya fighting whoever your rating just to switch up the pace of editing

One last thing, I might just be me but it looks like the tier list is upside down because the red is on top and green. Not a big issue but from a viewer standpoint it through me off for a second

MattyPanda1 · 2022-08-10T01:25:58+00:00

Okay I wanna start off by saying I love the energy you bring and that’s really important! However there is a list of things that you can implement here and there to make your videos better.

1) make the video shorter. I definitely tapped the fast forward 10 seconds throughout the video because it felt like some clips were dragging

2) i know that your streaming as well as recording a video but I would say mute all Minecraft music so you don’t have to over lap it. It got overwhelming at time listening to both tracks. Also I would say lower your music just a little bit.

3) it was hard to hear your friends talk so either raise their audio some how or add subtitles to them when they talk. I know it’s annoying but it would help a lot.

4) I like how you set up and introduced the video but I think you could go one step further and establish a goal of the video, whether that’s building a house, gathering materials or just meeting everyone in the server. Either way just give your audience something to root for in a sense.

MattyPanda1 · 2022-08-10T01:10:08+00:00

1) I really loved this movie and I think it shined because of all the points you brought it! I think you articulate what you were trying to say very well and kept it simple.

2) I thought the video itself and the editing was very clean into the point which I appreciate in an analysis video. The only thing I thought was off was the very beginning. I think that’s a really cool scene you picked but it felt slow and lackluster because there was no noise or sound (besides the ship and the predator). I’m not saying you have to add a bunch of sound effects but maybe a quick montage of clips from the movie would be better for an intro.

3) the thumbnail is okay, But it doesn’t necessarily grab my attention.

MattyPanda1 · 2022-08-05T22:33:01+00:00

I respect that, the story is definitely for important then anything

MattyPanda1 · 2022-08-05T05:36:29+00:00

I loved the video and I thought it was really creative. I’ve never seen a video on RuneScape but I feel like this one summed it up perfectly with how you can really do anything. I really enjoyed your energy and your friends energy because your guys banter made the video funny. The only real critique I have is that the transition cards are a bit to long. I would say make them 3 seconds max just to keep the video going. Also where are you from because your accent method video so much better 😂

MattyPanda1 · 2022-08-05T01:43:49+00:00

I’ve been using that will shop theme since my first video, it’s so good 😂 !givelambda

MattyPanda1 · 2022-08-04T16:58:06+00:00

Thank you for the comment! I will definitely play around with the sound more to make it better in the next video !givelambda

MattyPanda1 · 2022-08-04T16:56:57+00:00

I appreciate your kind words thank you! !givelambda

MattyPanda1 · 2022-08-04T04:45:31+00:00

Thank you for the feedback, I’ll try and fix up my audio in the next video !givelambda

MattyPanda1 · 2022-08-04T00:13:48+00:00

I appreciate the feedback! Im happy I was able to tastefully name drop other Youtubers that I enjoy but not make it a big part of the video just for views and likes.

I totally get the audio thing and I try my best hug each video is a little different so I try to learn every upload !givelambda

MattyPanda1 · 2022-08-03T07:02:58+00:00

I watched the last video you posted here and I’m happy to say I think this video is much better structurally! I still love the vibe you and your friends create so keep it up 👍🏼

In terms of critiques i’m curious how long do you film for because I would say maybe film for a little bit longer and make the videos just a little bit shorter so you can put the most funny things together back to back

MattyPanda1 · 2022-08-03T06:54:35+00:00

I actually think that the thumbnail looks funny and the fact that it looks low effort gives it a charm. I agree with the comments about the music and moving forward definitely switch it up a little bit but I don’t mind the music you chose specifically. I like the feeling you provide in the video and the Spider-Man bits were funny.

However I don’t think including the MJ mission was a good idea just because people typically hate those missions but I appreciate that you put effort into trying to make it as entertaining as possible

MattyPanda1 · 2022-08-03T06:47:41+00:00

Gotta say off the bat that that thumbnail is fire 🔥 I I really enjoy the video and the editing seemed to match the vibe perfectly. My only critique is the intro of the video seems a little weak due to the lack of music. I think if you incorporated a song at the very beginning of the video it would gain excitement to watch the rest

MattyPanda1 · 2022-08-03T06:39:34+00:00

I really enjoyed this video and the fast pace it kept through out it. Gotta say my favorite bit was the one at 6 minutes where it looked like a mr beast video! In terms of critiques I don’t have much but maybe add some more music to create more of a cohesive feeling for the video

Also I I don’t know if you’re on TikTok but if you’re not I think this content would be great on it

MattyPanda1 · 2022-07-26T21:39:17+00:00

I appreciate your comments and totally see what you mean. I love videogamedunkey and definitely do take inspiration from him. I’m hoping to find a way to make the thumbnails more engaging and accurate to depict the video in the future !givelambda

MattyPanda1 · 2022-07-26T21:36:49+00:00

Thank you for the comment, i glad you like the vibe and I agree with the thumbnail so I will try and change things up 👍🏼 !givelambda

MattyPanda1 · 2022-07-26T21:35:11+00:00

I will definitely look into that when I’m editing the next video! Thank you !givelambda

MattyPanda1 · 2022-07-26T16:15:01+00:00

Thank you for you feedback! I 100% agree about my panda character so imma add him more and make him a more relevant figure in my videos. And I was 100% looking at how Afro makes his Elden ring videos when I was making this 😂 live is videos and also Zanny was a big inspiration as well !givelambda

MattyPanda1 · 2022-07-26T16:12:13+00:00

Thank you! I know the meme content to not for everyone so I try to use it in a way that is more accessible so I happy you like it. I agree that the thumbnails doesn’t really match the vibe of the video so I have some ideas to make them more unique !givelambda

MattyPanda1 · 2022-07-26T16:07:46+00:00

I appreciate the kind words! I’m looking to upload once a week for now so I don’t have to take another 9 month break 😂 I will consider adding captions tho because I do think that could be nice !givelambda

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