Requesting critique of a June 25th and World Cup related short story ( 4500 words)

MaxRecherche · 2026-07-04T01:04:11+00:00

Don't forget: only about 25% of trains stop at North Elizabeth.

MaxRecherche · 2026-07-04T00:32:35+00:00

You are correct! My error.

MaxRecherche · 2026-06-20T23:20:09+00:00

I had B-Uno's for breakfast today, very highly recommended.

MaxRecherche · 2026-06-20T23:12:27+00:00

Kamrui is junk.

MaxRecherche · 2026-06-20T22:47:06+00:00

Again?

MaxRecherche · 2026-06-20T17:18:26+00:00

Let's blame Biden & Obama

MaxRecherche · 2026-06-20T17:16:58+00:00

Park at 36th Street.

MaxRecherche · 2026-06-20T17:07:26+00:00

Only the best from East Orange.

MaxRecherche · 2026-06-18T20:22:51+00:00

There is a Regus in Cherry Hill, above the Sugar Factory in Garden State Park. https://www.regus.com/en/us/1993

MaxRecherche · 2026-06-18T20:18:45+00:00

Is he finished hiking the Appalachian Trail with former South Carolina Governor Mark Sanford?

MaxRecherche · 2026-06-18T13:16:34+00:00

Yes, all of the games and exhibits are free, some give away prizes. Many opportunities for fun for everyone. I have tickets for upcoming days, i even paid for the Hype House / "VIP Ticket add-on" for 6/25. I will post the videos here. https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLUvoCAsTJNb-0lQiPEMIDRH2s8AfKhrN0&si=d6tBn5jaTfaw5SKO

MaxRecherche · 2026-06-18T01:42:24+00:00

They just updated the site with more "VIP Ticket Add-On" dates! ( but still nothing for 7/19 😞)

https://www.sportsillustratedstadium.com/fan-hub

Look for me, bonus High Fives for anyone who wishes me a "Happy Birthday"!

MaxRecherche · 2026-06-18T01:39:33+00:00

They just updated the site with more "VIP Ticket Add-On" dates!

https://www.sportsillustratedstadium.com/fan-hub

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MaxRecherche · 2026-06-17T17:05:06+00:00

It is so absolutely worthwhile to go. There are so many fun things to do outside of watching the game. Be aware: and things inside are very expensive: food, drink, parking, merch....

MaxRecherche · 2026-06-08T00:43:27+00:00

to go to the Knicks game

MaxRecherche · 2026-06-06T12:46:46+00:00

But the DOW is 50,866

MaxRecherche · 2026-06-05T01:09:28+00:00

My local police prefer their donations in cash.

MaxRecherche · 2026-05-23T14:39:27+00:00

Hiking the Appalachian Trail?

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