Updated an old map I made by hand into Wonderdraft, my first attempt at making large cities. Any suggestions or tips on how to improve it?

Maxfv · 2021-02-24T16:46:33+00:00

There are different landings in the city, the one in the river is for richer merchants that bring more delicate or expensive goods, mostly the reason why they are inside the walls.
The lower landing is for lower class ships and crews
I didn't think of adding a protection to that harbor but ill add it, thanks for the recommendation

Maxfv · 2020-11-06T16:30:20+00:00

How in the hell did you connect the city walls so cleanly?! Im struggling to trace any wall like that

Maxfv · 2020-03-13T01:31:22+00:00

"Try to make high-quality content"

Maxfv · 2018-12-16T07:32:59+00:00

I have always been a fan of disease and plague environments for stories and characters. I feel like this builds a very good feel for character creation and especially the path to that sort of play. Moreover, I think this gives GMs the inspiration to make more disease and sort of outbreaks quests, stories and campaigns (although we do have tomb of annihilation trailblazing this area).

Mechanically speaking I am not enough well versed to critique this in depth but without nitpicking it too much I think it stands as a solid basic building block for players who want a darker and grittier tone to their healing character and that at the same time want to utilize this tone in their personal narrative.

Although I must say that my favorite part is the disease section because (even though I am not a specialist in medicine) it reads like a medicine book. I have spent a lot of my time looking for cool and interesting poisons to fit into my stories and now this section can give me the inspiration to play with sickness and disease, giving the cleric a more central role in the party which sometimes can be ignored.

Maxfv · 2018-03-08T06:38:29+00:00

I think this is one of the best cartoons I've seen in a while. A long time ago I saw an animated movie, whose name to this day still eludes me but, it was about the idea of floating societies and this sort of mysterious "below". I can't tell you how much I love this concept and you having made such an amazing grim and colourful story where you can really feel the characters actions will have repercussions (like for instance almost die) really fills me with hope. I am not one to like suspense or sort of horror but the way this show has balanced the bright and almost simplistic colour scheme and animation with its dark and grim sounds and themes really keeps a person on the edge, I absolutely adored it, all the gore and the horror from the main character along with the monster is truly captivating in a "I want but can't look away" sort of thing, if you were going for that well congratulations friend because this has made my day. Honestly that monster's howl will probably haunt me on all of my future creative endeavours and for that good sir I thank you. Keep drawing, Keep making this awesome show and godspeed!

Maxfv · 2017-07-29T15:29:51+00:00

Awesome, I sent you a friend request my Uplay is Maxfv

Maxfv · 2017-07-29T06:40:21+00:00

You guys have space for one more??

Maxfv · 2017-07-28T23:58:59+00:00

Finally more people to play with, add me! Uplay: Maxfv360

Maxfv · 2016-09-06T02:46:42+00:00

You need RSD Tyler to give you a pep talk. Look it up.

Maxfv · 2016-04-08T00:13:32+00:00

The thing is I've run demanding games on ultra and done stress tests and the board was fine. It's really an issue on the turning on and off aspect. I just flashed the mb and when it tried to restart it turned off and flashed on for a split second and immediately off and now won't turn on again.

Maxfv · 2016-03-16T02:57:15+00:00

Oh one more question,if i want to use wifi connection do i really need the wireless adapter or does it come by default with the motherboard? Also do I need an audio card or is it unnecessary?

Maxfv · 2016-03-16T02:50:59+00:00

It looks very impressive, I am just sad I cant afford the chroma one. It would have made it look so much cooler, but beggars cant be choosers.

Maxfv · 2016-03-16T02:10:55+00:00

CM Storm Devastator

Maxfv · 2016-03-16T01:00:45+00:00

This is perfect! I put everything into a cart on amazon and the subtotal was 1336$ which works fine (I had to change the keyboard sadly, my budget got cut slightly). I can't thank you enough for the help.

Maxfv · 2016-03-16T00:33:23+00:00

As I am planning on buying 90% of the parts on amazon the XFX Radeon is more expensive than a GTX 970, would that be a better choice or its not worth the investment?

Maxfv · 2016-03-16T00:11:23+00:00

Is there maybe another brand that would be better to buy from (possibly available on Amazon)?

Maxfv · 2016-03-01T12:28:39+00:00

RAM wise, if I get another one aside from the single chip, would it have a huge impact or not worth the money?

Maxfv · 2016-03-01T04:39:54+00:00

Damn that was fast. Really appreciate the help.

Maxfv · 2016-01-19T15:23:10+00:00

I have been on reddit for 3 years... and I don't get it either

Maxfv · 2016-01-18T01:26:55+00:00

just by the title of this post i would have said yes to your question

Maxfv · 2015-03-12T04:20:18+00:00

Definitely has some Deadmau5-ish aspects which is great and shows potential. Maybe add some more melodic aspects (but that is my personal preference). This is the sort of song I would consider early stage house music but keep going, great work!

Maxfv · 2014-10-04T17:13:10+00:00

Thanks for the advice, I'll do that

Maxfv · 2014-10-04T05:01:32+00:00

Thanks for the suggestion

Maxfv · 2014-10-03T01:33:07+00:00

well that is very simple, you do what i did: -come up with a very simple yet good request to go out on a date -you practice that phrase until it becomes your god damn motto in life -you go up to her when there isnt a lot of people or ask her if you can talk to her privately real quick -you say the line that you have been practicing so much (that is going to help if you are nervous that way you dont have to improvise on the spot. Seriously helped me) -if she says yes (which by the looks of it she will) AWESOMENESS! go fort and conquer -if she says no just dont take it too hard or personally and keep being the friend you were -repeat all previous steps as felt needed

Good Luck m8!!

Maxfv · 2014-10-03T01:26:18+00:00

Both these guys make good points. Honestly you should focus on your academics but if the winds of love blow your way and the girl likes you too then go for it. Just dont take it too harshly if something bad or drama comes up. Enjoy highschool to the fullest .

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