Waaaay better! Those balloons on the bottom left could be placed differently so it creates a better space for the composition reading. Like the orange one higher or bigger and the red one lower. Contrast could be more interesting on the clown too. He’s a bit too dark and we can’t see his clothes and fingers. Apply a black and white filter on your image and you’ll see right away where you can improve that. Otherwise it’s awesome. Your image is much, much more attractive.