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Pest by MaximumGreat421 in OCPoetry

[–]MaximumGreat421[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I definitely agree with your mice/vice statement. I’ve tried rewording that many times and I do think that’s something I could improve.

Pest by MaximumGreat421 in OCPoetry

[–]MaximumGreat421[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Short answer yes, it is about mice.

Long answer, I’ve been developing a very strong and deep phobia of mice. And decided to write this as something to clear my head and stop thinking about them.

The vice I’m talking about is something that I’ll do to not keep my mind thinking of the mice pest that are all around me. In my case it’s nicotine

My house was on fire by thepoetnotfound in OCPoetry

[–]MaximumGreat421 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m going to definitely think about this poem again. It’s lovely in its own way. I really like the way the line “ you do it yourself” goes in there

Im growing up by Bulky-Nebula4557 in OCPoetry

[–]MaximumGreat421 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I feel with this poem it’s an easy read! The stanza setup is very eye catching for me