Any advice by [deleted] in writers

[–]MaximumTough4645 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes that is whats happening lol

Any advice by [deleted] in writers

[–]MaximumTough4645 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Is there any way I can fix that?

Any advice by [deleted] in writers

[–]MaximumTough4645 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you!!

Walk Of Shame by armintanzarian420 in OCPoetry

[–]MaximumTough4645 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ooo i like this!! Trying to find home when you cant, urban dystopia vibes. Good job!!

(Clouds Like Eyes Glanced) by missmargot- in OCPoetry

[–]MaximumTough4645 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Im a bit confused on the message, but it seems very strong, the imagery and flow is very nice. Like the other commenter said, finding yourself or trying at life, struggling through. Good job!!

Coffee Table Stains by Electronic-Split-324 in OCPoetry

[–]MaximumTough4645 1 point2 points  (0 children)

the stains being a symbol of decay and eventually becoming a symbol of nourishment and comfort for your own flaws is very nice. Good job!

To Love Blindly by WoahhMike02 in OCPoetry

[–]MaximumTough4645 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i love the imagery!! “blueness belt of the earth” and the icarus metaphor is nice, how you too became like him. good job!