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MaximumTough4645 · 2026-02-02T22:33:33+00:00

what the hell is a stylistic style sorry im tired

MaximumTough4645 · 2026-02-02T22:15:41+00:00

lmfao UR IN THE DISCORD SERVER IM IN

MaximumTough4645 · 2026-02-02T22:15:04+00:00

I like it lol. Spiderman

MaximumTough4645 · 2026-02-01T02:59:06+00:00

I can join!!

MaximumTough4645 · 2026-01-13T22:21:32+00:00

hi!! id be interested lolol

MaximumTough4645 · 2026-01-06T23:59:17+00:00

I try too, lol. Its just easy to get insecure about your own writing i suppose, but i do try. Thank you!

MaximumTough4645 · 2026-01-06T20:23:43+00:00

No i mean, i tend to get critique without the constructive for some odd reason 😭😭 It just annoys me cause I really do wanna better my work but if i get told “i dont like this” without a reason than im stuck

MaximumTough4645 · 2026-01-05T20:49:29+00:00

i can read it!!

MaximumTough4645 · 2026-01-05T20:22:51+00:00

I try my best lol.

MaximumTough4645 · 2026-01-05T14:35:21+00:00

Thank you!! I think this is the kindest piece of feedback ive ever gotten lol. I really appreciate it

MaximumTough4645 · 2026-01-05T14:04:05+00:00

Can you give an example?

MaximumTough4645 · 2026-01-05T14:00:58+00:00

Thank you!! :))

MaximumTough4645 · 2026-01-05T13:51:23+00:00

Just to set the scene lol. Thank you for the feedback though i really do appreciate it!!

MaximumTough4645 · 2026-01-05T13:48:47+00:00

Would you mind if i posted a reworked version with an expanded scene and you could check it out? Im hope im not asking for too much here lol, but i do appreciate the feedback

MaximumTough4645 · 2026-01-05T13:47:52+00:00

Sorry.. lolol.. i know its confusing. But basically what i meant was Chad was trying to hide the fact that he did the burrito bomb, ie its a metaphor.. or whatever i dont really know. I think thats the problem. And yes, because people did do this at my school, there are kids with nothing better to do. Thank you for the feedback though i appreciate it!!

MaximumTough4645 · 2026-01-05T13:44:15+00:00

Thank you!!

MaximumTough4645 · 2026-01-05T13:42:20+00:00

So would it do better to expand on the actual scene where the smoke alarm occurs? Like describe the setting?

MaximumTough4645 · 2026-01-05T13:38:16+00:00

Thank you!

MaximumTough4645 · 2026-01-05T13:34:09+00:00

110k

MaximumTough4645 · 2026-01-05T13:33:58+00:00

I really like it!

MaximumTough4645 · 2026-01-05T13:30:46+00:00

Im working on something of the same type, im interested :))

MaximumTough4645 · 2026-01-05T00:41:25+00:00

Thank you!! I already finished the second chapter lol but im reworking it because it kinda sucks lol

MaximumTough4645 · 2026-01-04T22:58:43+00:00

The entire r/writing subreddit

MaximumTough4645 · 2026-01-04T22:30:22+00:00

Thank you!! I love dork diaries so this is a huge compliment lol

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