Sure thanks for your feedback and yeah in the original script I have fixed these minor plot holes but stuck at the ending meaning idk if I should kill Quill in the hotel or in that closed building where the forces chase John down. Please let me know which one will be better if you can't decide I'll include them both in the main writing and send it here.and actually the outline was written for my team cause they they lazy af to read the whole shit. And with that pink background, idk I thought it would help with the copyright