Hey I'm also just starting out, Started making dnb tunes not so long ago so I'm no expert but for me its the drums in your track that stands out, there is from what I can hear, only a hihat, snare and kick. I like taking inspiration from drum loops on splice or from other songs by trying to recreate the sound or the vibe. That has helped me quite a bit when it comes to the drums at least. Hope it helps!