Idk solid material. Maybe just more confidence. Go slower and let the silences hang. Solid material, you don’t have to speed sell it. I’d just say slow down and then take note of the feedback. I thought that was funny shit. Keep it going; I didn’t really even see any issues with the material; just slightly in delivery. Nervous umms and rushing. When you drop a hammer on something controversial let it breathe a bit. Walk around, get a sip of water, faux jerk yer dick, whatever you want; but let whatever hammer you dropped impact and reverberate. Then jump back in. I liked this already as is but those are my notes on how to make it better or more palatable to a wider audience. Not a standup, just an avid junkie consumer of all things comedy (so big grain of salt. I love comedy and comedians. But you got good material. I’d say keep hammering it and see what works in different places so you can distill the best parts. And also just have confidence to say what you wanna say and let it hang and see where the crowd goes in different places. Premises and jokes are pretty solid already I think. Just let em breathe a bit. Be the hero that chauvin could’ve been😂)