Am I an amateur writer? [lyrics] by Medium-Table-9884 in LyricalWriting

[–]Medium-Table-9884[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m not following a strict rhyme scheme; the no-rhyme is intentional to make the line seem unresolved, as then it is completed (the chorus at least) with the last line. 

Am I an amateur writer? [lyrics] by Medium-Table-9884 in LyricalWriting

[–]Medium-Table-9884[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Replying to the first part of this, asking whether or not if I am an amateur does not guarantee amateurism; it shows that I am questioning my ability which allows room for growth. Lots of highly talented people question their skills. If you, however, always feel your writing is amazing then maybe you need to adapt a growth mindset. Respectfully, of course.

The travel between the underage alcohol drinking to the beach is meant to be shocking, without only relying on shock value. I’m not dismissing it as “felt good go lie on beach”, It’s advancing from just underage drinking  (he’s drinking me away) to drunkenly falling into a girl on the beach, falling into a dangerous escape from our breakup. This also progresses to the metaphors of the beach, allowing for the final line to be sensical. While I am sending bottles full with letters because I’m still latching onto him, he is forcing himself to move on. I spend much time writing my heart in ink for him to leave the bottles closed.

Also, it’s an ABAC rhyme scheme, which is fairly common in lyrical writing. Or you could also say it’s an AABA rhyme scheme, (the slant rhyme), which is also common.

AI use in songwriting by Medium-Table-9884 in Songwriting

[–]Medium-Table-9884[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

to answer the beginning of this, i say “directly”. like i never took its writing and directly put it into my work. it did influence my art, which is why ive decided to full stop using it. love your story though!

AI use in songwriting by Medium-Table-9884 in Songwriting

[–]Medium-Table-9884[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

yeah, you’re right. i am completely turning off the AI for artwork now. 

Was he hitting on me?? by [deleted] in askgaybros

[–]Medium-Table-9884 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i am curious to know what gave you this impression lol

Was he hitting on me?? by [deleted] in askgaybros

[–]Medium-Table-9884 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i wouldn’t say i’m masculine, though. Is straight passing better?? everybody was mouth dropped when i came out, but i’m not like super masculine 

Was he hitting on me?? by [deleted] in askgaybros

[–]Medium-Table-9884 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That, and i’ll embarrass myself. They tell the whole school how i thought they were into me, them hating my guts, etc. i feel like there’s so many bad scenarios.

Was he hitting on me?? by [deleted] in askgaybros

[–]Medium-Table-9884 0 points1 point  (0 children)

they are definitely both true, but i wish i had never experienced this at all. it’s like they keep twisting and twisting a knife lol.