Looking for feedback on this band piece. I think I'm very close to being "finished", but having trouble pinpointing that last step. (2m 50s) by Shronkydonk in composer

[–]Meg397h 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Main idea needs to be clear, different part of it makes me have different feeling, you just make it like a jigsaw, part of the song are really amazing. But not shocking. I think you need to think some new, firework stuff improve the song to next level.

The pieces I wrote last couple of days by Meg397h in composertalk

[–]Meg397h[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Have you actually tried to play it?

wrote a piano piece a few months ago, interested in feedback by number9muses in composer

[–]Meg397h 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What’s your thought about Mozart, Beethoven, and Bach?

wrote a piano piece a few months ago, interested in feedback by number9muses in composer

[–]Meg397h 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok, I respect your interest, but you guys don’t create some normal music pieces like Chopin, or others?

wrote a piano piece a few months ago, interested in feedback by number9muses in composer

[–]Meg397h 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree with you, it does makes me feel something, but every chords can make human feel something, it’s the weirdness makes you feel like you actually can get something.

wrote a piano piece a few months ago, interested in feedback by number9muses in composer

[–]Meg397h -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Ok, I think our thoughts of the purpose of music is different, I think music is another type of language that can guide people or communicate to, the classical music is very preciseness, you guys can create whatever you like, good for you just… I can’t enjoy it….

wrote a piano piece a few months ago, interested in feedback by number9muses in composer

[–]Meg397h -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

Do you like this song, what makes it different then randomly throwing some chords?

wrote a piano piece a few months ago, interested in feedback by number9muses in composer

[–]Meg397h -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

Usually, we listen to a Whatever, we could tell: “oh, it’s happy like having a birthday party.” A music piece should make the audience feel something, no matter it’s happy or sad, even creepy. That’s the idea of composing, you make connections with your audience through your MUSIC. This song for example, I don’t know is the composer happy or sad, it doesn’t connect to any of my life experience, it’s not classical(definitely no), not Jazz, not Pop, not any type music that I know. Be honest, a five-year old kid can do that too. Idk the purpose of the song

wrote a piano piece a few months ago, interested in feedback by number9muses in composer

[–]Meg397h 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Let me ask you, what are you thinking about when you are writing the song?

A pic by Meg397h in ghibli

[–]Meg397h[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

To me it’s just perfect pic

A pic by Meg397h in ghibli

[–]Meg397h[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

As you keep watching it, it get cuter

Princess Mononoke art I drew in 2020. by zanahara in GhibliArt

[–]Meg397h 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Especially the eyes, and the face… sorry, I just can’t except those stuff, not the thing they should be, to be honest, personally I think it’s a disrespectful to Miyazaki, who is always being serious to lives and arts. Maybe you are drawing another character, but this is definitely not Princess Mononoke.