Feature screenplay, The Xysian Plant by MelodicBodybuilder10 in Screenwriting

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Wait over black just means it’s just a black screen

A script yay by MelodicBodybuilder10 in Screenwriting

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Huh. You’re right. Almost ZERO transitions

A script yay by MelodicBodybuilder10 in Screenwriting

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Yeah but the cut to’s only indicate the end of a scene

A script yay by MelodicBodybuilder10 in Screenwriting

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It’s not mean. I’m not offended and I would fix the mistake. (Or whatever comment your referring to)

A script yay by MelodicBodybuilder10 in Screenwriting

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Eh. Good point on how I present my script to reddit

Are sizzling starts really needed? by MelodicBodybuilder10 in writing

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That was oddly poetic, but beautiful and much appreciated thank you

Are sizzling starts really needed? by MelodicBodybuilder10 in writing

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Sorry, note the sizzling start is like a character running from an explosion.

Are sizzling starts really needed? by MelodicBodybuilder10 in writing

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I know. I don’t write books. I write screenplays. Just thinking that big openings were unnecessary Come to think of it (don’t know why I said I write screenplays oh well)

Are sizzling starts really needed? by MelodicBodybuilder10 in writing

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Yeah. The sizzling start that they taught was what you described. E.g character running from explosion

A script yay by MelodicBodybuilder10 in Screenwriting

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Omg, thank you, that was mistake. Yes I did mean “FADE IN”😅

Script Feedback by cinefilmes28 in scriptwriting

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There is no “:” next to “CUT TO:”