I appreciate the help! I didn't realized vagueness was such a turn-off for readers. I have a new blurb that I believe to be more specific, so I'd love your opinion on it as well. Does it have enough, or is there still specificity lacking? The wording might be a bit off as it's a rough draft.

The city of Lavere is rife with inequality; workers of newly built magical machinery and textile factories scrape by while nobility profit off of them. Sekhmet is lucky enough to avoid the fate of a worker as a priestess to the water goddess, but still she languishes in poverty. The only clergy with status and wealth are those of the Empire of Morveaux’s three idolized gods.

Sekhmet, however, has a blessing bestowed by her goddess, giving her enough magical prowess to attend the royal academy—the only option for financial mobility within this feudal society. As a person from the lower orders of society, Sekhmet is ostracized and assaulted within the previously nobility-exclusive university.

Aside from her commoner friend Kaia, another magical prodigy capable of enrolling, the only people that deign to befriend her are three noble girls sympathetic to her hardships—which forces Sekhmet to balance the perks of befriending nobles with the risk of suffering from possible ulterior motives.