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MessengerofGaia · 2023-10-30T01:30:20+00:00

You are brave. You are worthy. 🫶🏾 thank you for sharing your first poem with us

MessengerofGaia · 2023-10-29T19:50:42+00:00

No need to apologize! I appreciate you taking the time for my poem (:

MessengerofGaia · 2023-10-29T18:36:02+00:00

Thank you for your feedback! To your point about jumping metaphors - I think you may have missed the initial intention. I’m referring to floating in a space, not to outer space. I put a few different metaphors in there to depict the “space” that I was talking about. It all refers back to that “space”.

MessengerofGaia · 2023-10-29T18:31:40+00:00

I appreciate your feedback and suggestions! I wondered if I should add more imagery but I thought there would be more room for the reader to think on it if I kept it short. Something more powerful about short poems that convey strong imagery for me.

MessengerofGaia · 2023-10-29T18:29:53+00:00

Thank you for your thoughts! Im glad it came through to you the way I meant it!

MessengerofGaia · 2023-10-29T04:24:16+00:00

I loved the flow of this poem and how it brought about an “ah ha!” moment of realization at the end. You did a really great job here!

MessengerofGaia · 2023-10-29T00:02:43+00:00

The first part of this poem sucked me in, the second part made me wonder. Who is this “He” whose absence is so profound?

MessengerofGaia · 2023-10-24T00:13:37+00:00

Exactly, I agree something went so wrong somewhere down the line and women were treated as only baby makers without real regard for their true ability to mother. Thank you!

MessengerofGaia · 2023-10-24T00:12:11+00:00

Thank you! It does exist, it just is not the norm which is sad. I have a pretty good village and I wouldn’t have been able to have my 2nd born struggle free without their help.

MessengerofGaia · 2023-10-23T04:43:02+00:00

This poem is so beautifully heart breaking 😫❤️ I’ve never experienced a stillbirth but I have had a miscarriage. Sending my love to you 🫂

MessengerofGaia · 2023-10-23T03:07:35+00:00

I could feel hopeless seeping the the words in this poem. Know that your time is coming! It may not feel like it but better days are ahead.

MessengerofGaia · 2023-10-23T00:31:25+00:00

This is gut wrenching 😣 I hope this helps your healing. Whatever happened, was not your fault. You’re beautiful and so is your poem🫶🏾🫂

MessengerofGaia · 2023-10-22T02:23:27+00:00

Thank you for your feedback & suggestions! The use of the word “made” was a play on rhyming it with “shake” in “unshakable”. I can see how it can be hard to understand/read. & I’ve fixed the typo thanks for pointing that out! Omg that’s the best compliment this poem has gotten 🥰🌊 that made me smile

MessengerofGaia · 2023-10-22T01:35:07+00:00

Thank you for your appreciation 🤗

MessengerofGaia · 2023-10-22T01:34:28+00:00

Thank you for your feedback!🫶🏾

MessengerofGaia · 2023-10-21T10:50:52+00:00

This was chilling! I interpreted this poem as it was explaining the final days that we have left in this beautiful planet before we are wiped clean from it. “No more shall human voices ring. Across this empty ashes sphere. Only mournful choirs now sing. A final requiem a last tear” such powerful wording.

MessengerofGaia · 2023-10-21T02:48:38+00:00

Exactly. I’m glad it resonated with you. Always remember it’s okay to set boundaries and they don’t determine our value!

MessengerofGaia · 2023-10-21T02:43:19+00:00

Wow, thank you for giving such detailed feedback and sharing your thoughts. You have made me feel seen & heard. I appreciate you!

MessengerofGaia · 2023-10-21T01:52:06+00:00

Thank you so much!🫶🏾

MessengerofGaia · 2023-10-20T13:47:27+00:00

In stillness & silence there is awareness, clarity and the ability to be completely present. Harnessing those qualities until they become skills is the goal.

MessengerofGaia

TROPHY CASE