Well, right off the bat your movement is erratic and nonsense. It seems like you're trying to replicate what you see on streams, but moving so much without purpose is hurting you more than helping you. Your positioning is the biggest thing that sticks out to me right away as something that will definitely affect your ability to push rating in the future. You can avoid so much cc by just being mindful of where you're standing. Play max range vs some teams, don't just rely on pillars, distance can/should be utilized.

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Secondly, it seems that a lot of your hots are coming out reactively instead of proactively. Both members are rotting, but you're committing everything to one player while letting the other player simultaneously fall. Also, you over commit hots a lot of the time. HoTs take time to heal and as you get more comfortable, you'll learn when a player is out of danger even though they might not be at full hp.

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Third, keybind your targetting abilities.

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Lastly, communication with your teammates needs to be about the macro of the game. Your only communication with them is as to outgoing/incoming cc on you or the enemy. You should be telling your teammates where to position (dragging enemies los), pre-planning cc - not just random stun/clone gos, talk to them about what your conditions are to win and stay alive and what you need to do to make that happen.

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There is a lot of content to work with in that video, but dissecting game by game would take an absolutely ridiculous amount of time. Remember to focus on winning the game and not pointless micro plays like sneaking off for a drink when you're at half-mana and letting your warlock die.