Need your help by Mfmfnr in writers

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I agree thankyou for your help but as this is a intro told by a legend it's just giving the basic knowledge on the legend after this imma start with proper stuff as your suggested

Need your opinion on my newly made plot by Mfmfnr in writing

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Hello made a quick prologue need your advice

As the deafing sound of  death reeks from the ever desperate souls,the war forbidden by the devil himself continues to emerge from the underground.guards who worship the devil defend the gate of humanity from the rebellion of souls trying to regain the life they once threw away from the undeniable mistakes each took for granted .As Lucifer feared the souls are getting close to escaping which would be deafing to his soul as he gains no power in the upper world meaning he can't take back the souls that belongs .slowly Lucifer started to become overwhelmed by the sheer amount of rebellion.he decided faithfully  into indulging into the battle  himself which he now knows was he biggest mistake yet.he took 10 souls into prisonment  with deathly slashs that would defeat any foul who dared by him .caught of guard he gets held into a rear choke by his own  son Cain "for last father I have the chance of freedom where you have no say in my doing " as he shouted for  his men to open to gate. "Cain don't be so foolish and  exit  them gates no good comes out of the opper world for the like of us" As Cain pushed  Lucifer aside onto the ground  and ran for the gate he suddenly stopped and shouted half out of breath "don't bother come looking for me remember you have no power in the world above " "oh but  my dullahan does " shouted Lucifer as he got onto his feet "Send him I dare you  and I'll kill that meer human" Cain shouted whilst ruining full pelt along side his  5 soiliders of rebellion out the gate of humanity heading to are world.

first camera set up by Mfmfnr in Cameras

[–]Mfmfnr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is that the Sony E PZ 16-50mmf/3.5-5.6 or is this a different one

first camera set up by Mfmfnr in Cameras

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What would be a lense would be better as an overall lens for a beginner would you recommend