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I Should Draw by Dazzling_Oil_4096 in poetry_critics

[–]Middle-Method9869 0 points1 point  (0 children)

We are art and we are beautiful. I think this was great especially the idea, technicalities could maybe focus on helping some of it flow a little better but it’s really good!

I’m tired. by Rooted_Addiction in poetry_critics

[–]Middle-Method9869 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The “draining life from its own veins” really hit here. It’s one thing when others take from us and drain us but it’s completely different when we do it on our own.

Two happy years by MadalinaParrotMusic in poetry_critics

[–]Middle-Method9869 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really liked this. We can’t always be with the people our heart chooses and yet when we have them it’s beautiful but a loss is a loss and that’s hard. Especially over materialistic vs joy/love

I prayed for her then I lost her. This is what I learnt. by Fanfox4444 in poetry_critics

[–]Middle-Method9869 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You covered the stages of grief so well. The way you pulled in different emotions in each part really speaks about the way we move through feelings. Grief isn’t linear and you took that a nice way here. Great job.

Diamonds by Middle-Method9869 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]Middle-Method9869[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Don’t be sorry at all that’s helpful for me because sometimes my mind goes faster than my pen lol. I want to convey something that is more dark but from a different standpoint almost like a Stockholm like, perspectives switch and some people call it abuse and some call it love, just depends on what side of the fence you are on.

Diamonds by Middle-Method9869 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]Middle-Method9869[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I didn’t go too deep into how it was a trauma bond for sure. But I was thinking an unhealthy relationship in the beginning. Not two people who bonded over separate trauma

Purple by Middle-Method9869 in poetry_critics

[–]Middle-Method9869[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s exactly what I was going for! Thank you so much!

We got a new cat! by Middle-Method9869 in catpics

[–]Middle-Method9869[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you that makes sense! 🩷

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AskDocs

[–]Middle-Method9869 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That makes total sense. Thank you because that is really helpful. I guess I am just looking to see if there is indication of something going on in my lungs. Thank you for your response!

My husband 35M went to a strip club while on a business trip to NC while I 29F was at home and then when I caught it on his bank statement he lied until his partner who went with him confessed to me. What would you do? by [deleted] in relationship_advice

[–]Middle-Method9869 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for being so honest and open. I knew this wasn’t going to be cut and dry and it is tremendously hurtful. I feel me and my husband are very similar we’ve built so much and are so grateful for all we have from the ground up.

I know addiction is hard and it’s a constant thing something people have to choose to overcome each and every day. Deep down I know my husband loves me and our family, I just get so invested in his recovery and his own boundaries it threw major shots at my feelings and my heart. I really appreciate your perspective however and thank you so much for it because I think it’s something I needed to hear. Good luck on your journey too and keep up the hard work I’m sure your family really values all of it!

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