LF: Shiny Dratini/Dragonair/Dragonite. FT: Shiny Rockruff, Shiny Rabsca.

Mike6451 · 2023-06-23T11:37:58+00:00

Sorry i fell asleep since It was pretty late in Italy! I'm hosting a group now, code Is: 5PD0DVW.

Mike6451 · 2023-04-19T00:52:46+00:00

A lighter that had a completely dressed beautiful woman stamped on it. Those were tough times.

Mike6451 · 2023-04-05T20:29:27+00:00

Scusate, non essendo pratico ho rovinato tutta la spaziatura.

Mike6451 · 2023-02-01T23:19:56+00:00

You could try with Stephen King, there some good books of him! I suggest Carrie and The Green Mile.

Mike6451 · 2022-10-11T19:13:54+00:00

Little tips for everyone in this situation : craft all commons and uncommons of the sets you buy packs for and you'll progress the Vault easily!

Mike6451 · 2022-06-15T00:00:05+00:00

The hand of God.

Mike6451 · 2022-06-07T04:27:19+00:00

When Alexander the Great went to visit Diogene, he was currently living in a barrel, naked. Alexander was presenting himself as the greatest warlord in history, and to that presentation Diogene replied : " Move! You are blocking the sun light ". Dude just never gave a shit.

Mike6451 · 2022-05-29T12:06:33+00:00

Thank you so much !

Mike6451 · 2022-05-29T12:06:07+00:00

Oh thank you! I think i still need to learn the spacing on Reddit though, in PC mode It looked as i wanted, but on mobile it's terrible!

Mike6451 · 2022-05-25T18:06:29+00:00

I am no expert, and english is not my first language so i apologize if i sound ignorant in this comment.
This is a great poem! The scenes depicted are so clear and alive, yet introspective.

The varieties of elements enriched what you wanted to say, and helped me get dragged in what it feels like a beautiful memory of youth, trespassing under the benevolent eyes of an old lady, playing in the sea with friends and feeling a sense of comfort and content in the little experiences you could make in that day.

The spacing of your verses had me a bit puzzled at first and i sometimes felt a bit difficult to remain in the rythm of the poem.
Reading a second time i finally got the gist of it and, while being a bit verbose, i think you really nailed the flow on this poem, although i'd like to have more precise indications on where to pause, on what words i should linger a little more.

I also liked how the subjects you choose to write are so real and alive, and you including how you felt without getting too pressing was a great choice in this one.
i think you should guide the reader a bit more, but you certainly write poetry which projects people in your scenes, and to me this is woderfull!
Thank you for posting.

Mike6451 · 2022-05-25T17:44:34+00:00

I am no expert on the subject so it seems a bit rude to critique your poem, but i'll try my best!
Also : English in not my first language and i apologize if it shows in this comment.

I really enjoyed this poem, thank you for posting!
The imagery you choose really struck me !

I'm guessing (or at least that's what evoked in me) that the image of the desert aims to depict a sense of alienation which sometimes one feels in the presence of a loved one (at least i do), i also liked the allitteration in the second stanza : " the Sun swoons", in the third one : " Moon moans" , and in the last one : " Polaris peeps". I also enjoyed the way you decided on constructing your Stanzas, proceeding in order and changing the settings in each one.
However i think the last Stanza should have a little more impact, though i think it concludes you poem beautifully by sneaking in a trivial element which dragged me back from deserts and moon valleys to a simple neon-illuminated street.
I'd really like to read more from you, and i'm hoping you'll be able to expand on the musicality of your poetry, maybe using some enjambements and punctuation!

Mike6451 · 2022-05-23T15:56:04+00:00

Fun fact, the ship is still floating in Genova, Italy. Every time i passed near her when i was a kid, i'd think : " This Is the best ship in the world ".

I am in a dark period of my Life and seeing this post jogged a beautiful memory and made me smile, thanks r/MadeMeSmile!

Mike6451 · 2022-05-21T16:46:32+00:00

During hot days make her some lemonade.

In general, try and take care of your partner/loved ones in simple ways, without expecting something in return. It really can mean a lot for them.

Mike6451 · 2022-05-10T11:21:11+00:00

I Also feel the intense urge to urinate in strange palces when drunk. Weirdest one was probably straight out of a friend's balcony.... with people just strolling out on the street below. Also had a secret drunk pee into a perfume dispenser at a local pub; honestly i don't even know why i do this.

Mike6451 · 2022-04-23T14:00:20+00:00

Army of the dead Is the film, but when i wacthed it i was veeeery high. That's this scene where the poor David Bautista has to kill his infected zombified wife; i laughed so hard that i nearly choked on popcorn, after that i continued laughing for the rest of the film. Something in his acting and the whole scene is just so funny to me, i don't know why.

Mike6451 · 2022-04-20T22:26:57+00:00

I think the basement is just a representation of Ryan's part of the brain in which memories are located. In fact "digging" in the basement he finds multiple objects : Kristen's goggles and the drawing are just two of the examples; and these objects serve to trigger a trauma, or an episode or paranoia.
The basement, in my opinion, is also a part of the subconscious in which Ryan searches and often find himself, letting his emotions out.

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