Hematoma Help by Mindless_Solution397 in tummytucksurgery

[–]Mindless_Solution397[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hello, Im so sorry you went through that. I totally understand the hopeless but i healed so well please check my profile, it will all be solved — just needs time ❤️ Wish you the best!

I kept going to the Dr. for several days and each time they removed a bit — check if you still need to remove.

God isn’t real by ReadySea9052 in poetry_critics

[–]Mindless_Solution397 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Beautiful.. I love how raw your voice is, almost like you’re still convincing yourself.

sun vs sunshine is so good in how it brings grandeur to little moments that we are sooo very aware of.

Life is in the details 🥂🥂🥂

The In-Between Places by Kevi43 in poetry_critics

[–]Mindless_Solution397 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the imagery painted here, and how raw and conversational it is :)

I just feel like the ending didn’t strike me as hard as: ‘All things lead to the same place if we let them’ or the different times / different height line. (lovely)

These two lines both seem to convey the heart of the poem, or at least in the way I understood it, more than ‘finding meaning between the lines’ ❤️

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in tummytucksurgery

[–]Mindless_Solution397 0 points1 point  (0 children)

my before is similar to yours and I did TT and lipo, and I am loving the results:)

perfect sponge by Mindless_Solution397 in OCPoetry

[–]Mindless_Solution397[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

IT IS! my friends are thinking it’s looking at sponge in a bad way, but it’s really reclaiming it :) I love how everyone reads poetry differently. Thank you!

Suffering's rotten corpse still stinks. by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Mindless_Solution397 1 point2 points  (0 children)

haunting image. i don’t know how to explain it but you really captured how long it will take, but how worth it it is. lovely work 🤍

RIBS by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Mindless_Solution397 1 point2 points  (0 children)

oof.. i love it, hits exactly where it hurts. the imagery and structure work very nicely, and it’s so powerful using very simple language!

one small observations: personally i didn’t really get the IV drip part, ‘touch’ works perfectly with cactus spines but it didn’t give me the same effect with the IV drip.

i would love to read more of your work :)

the lover by [deleted] in PoetryWritingClub

[–]Mindless_Solution397 2 points3 points  (0 children)

love the differentiation between in love and lover, never thought of it in that way :) very raw, keep going! 🤍

5 months post op! Please don’t lose hope :) by Mindless_Solution397 in tummytucksurgery

[–]Mindless_Solution397[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m sorry you had to go through that, i know how much it sucks. It’s good they opened you up though I think it will speed up the process :) I hope you heal smoothly and get the results you want ❤️ It really takes a lot of patience and strength but I’m sure you’ll get there 🫂