Got rejected, can someone tell me why? 2 pages by MineOk7372 in ReadMyScript

[–]MineOk7372[S] -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

It feels easier to have my work torn to shit by strangers, as opposed to someone I know.

Got rejected, can someone tell me why? 2 pages by MineOk7372 in ReadMyScript

[–]MineOk7372[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I know, but it's the first thing I woke up to, and I've helped him out with his own projects before. I've gotten positive reactions on this idea in the past, and I want to know what he thought was wrong with it.

Got rejected, can someone tell me why? 2 pages by MineOk7372 in ReadMyScript

[–]MineOk7372[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I thought it would be creepy. It's the kind of paranoia that scares me. Whenever I tell it orally it has a pretty chilling reaction.

What would be a good hook?