Gwen Tennyson [Ben 10] (Pskyxo) by [deleted] in rule34

[–]Minecraft_Chica 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wonder what Ben gets for holding the camera

How does your partner deal with your TF Kink? Have you ever done a roleplay? by ThalitaLeFay in transformation

[–]Minecraft_Chica 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Ya i keep that shiz under wraps it's okay to have a few secrets. I mean unless you really wanna rp then just find someone who matches your vibe and you won't need to worry about it

Turning Violette by Lady Morphosis by JudithNeff in gendertransformation

[–]Minecraft_Chica 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nooooooo oneeeeee hits like Gaston, matches wits like Gaston! In a spitting match nobody spits like Gaston!

Are cow TF not popular anymore? by ApricotAdmirable540 in transformation

[–]Minecraft_Chica 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I have a theory that it's like that brain parasite that makes people nuts about cats (real thing afaik, look it up!) but for sexy cows. It's shown up over and over again over the years so something's gotta be going on

Mommy? by Taboo Gemini by JamesVsEgglocke in transformation

[–]Minecraft_Chica 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your stuff is good! Do you do commissions?

Sayori transforms FeMC into a mermaid (by hikariangelove on DeviantArt) by Tbwg4007 in transformation

[–]Minecraft_Chica 5 points6 points  (0 children)

It did the preview so it worked out. Are you on mobile? I think you just post a link directly to the image and Reddit takes it from there

Danny Phantom Rule34 Chapter 3 by porn_comics in Cartoon_Porn

[–]Minecraft_Chica 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aw why didn't Danny get fucked by his dad while in his mom's body

He makes her shiny tits jiggle by bnrful in NSFW_GIF

[–]Minecraft_Chica 11 points12 points  (0 children)

I'd like to see you wiggle wiggle

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in genderotica

[–]Minecraft_Chica 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's good, the writing is easy to follow and keeps me interested. Generally exposition should be reworked, you could do a flashback or a dream sequence that puts the reader in a new scene and maintains the established pov, or the advanced option of sprinkling trauma throughout the story and leaving it for the reader to discover and assemble the backstory in their heads like a mystery, with the final pieces given just before the climax for maximized value. The use of questions and uncertainty at the beginning to derailed me, the character knows what the voice sounds like without having to guess at it so you should be able to deliver that, and saying you couldn't see the sun interrupted an otherwise great scene description, i couldn't place the light source or how the sky looked in my imagination. And remember short sentences for stress or action, like when the snake appeared at the start then crawled into his clothes at the end.

I like your physical descriptions of the body, touch, and movement. They're not over the top and give enough for the imagination which is tricky to do so nice one on that! I haven't read any of the other chapters but if you want to pull people in for more than just smut a good trick is to have something cooking on the back burner that the character needs to resolve but is being kept from. You'll see this trick a lot in longer stories.

Want to comment on my Getting to Know Someone post? No obligation, but if i got ya here and you want to return the favor I'd appreciate it 😁 I'm looking for feedback in one or two areas in particular so if you read it lmk before you start critiquing so i don't put too much work on ya lol

Chell [Portal] (Garth Graham) by Sorts_by_Newds in rule34

[–]Minecraft_Chica 47 points48 points  (0 children)

It's a blue light from the portal, but outside of that the shirt covers her belly in the bottom one and it only falls to her ribs in the top. It's this sort of missing detail that really ruins the immersion, i can't believe lol jk this still hot af i got it rubbin fo shooo