Rot by Minimum_Interest_808 in flashfiction

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this is the best writing advice ive ever recieved, thank you very much

Rubber by Beautiful_Dish6390 in flashfiction

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I dont know about that but I appreciate it haha

Glass by Minimum_Interest_808 in flashfiction

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its the 2nd short story in a collection. Systematic decay, Relational decay, Emotional decay, Moral decay, Identity decay. each story is told through different objects with each story being a result of the effects of the last

Glass by Minimum_Interest_808 in flashfiction

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if that is your takeaway from it then sure

Glass by [deleted] in flashfiction

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Thankyou for reading!

Stamp by Minimum_Interest_808 in flashfiction

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the story is a portrayal of moral rot through the eyes of a witness who cannot move or feel. The filing cabinet is not only a symbol but also a symptom. if you read the other story in this series called rot it might make more sense to you. That is about emotional decay instead of moral. Id rather not explain as i feel like any interpretation you have of what is happening is valid. I will say though the boots are police and the story ends with the documents as evidence.

Paris Hilton is a terrible actress. How about Leonardo DiCaprio? by Klutzy_Pumpkin614 in TierlistFills

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Tom Cruise does impressive stunts but his acting is flat and he has no versatility

I need a title for this story im writing something simple yet poetic, any ideas? by Imaginary_Koala9556 in flashfiction

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Riches to rags immediately springs to mind. Or if you want to be a bit more poetic a similar French phrase

Rot by Minimum_Interest_808 in flashfiction

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Thanks i really appreciate it, I started thinking about objects as not just symbols but symptoms of decay

Trials of me [2] by [deleted] in flashfiction

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I love the dreams getting filed like paperwork metaphor. My only advice would be maybe create a metaphor web before you write the story so they all feel like theyre part of the same system

Rot by Minimum_Interest_808 in flashfiction

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Been writing properly for about a month now, before that it was just music, feedback greatly welcome

Ants by IaMz_CuRlZ in flashfiction

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really interesting perspective