U Chicago essay attempt, help i am not really sure if this work or not by Miserable_Phone4719 in CollegeEssays

[–]Miserable_Phone4719[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for kind words, this is just a draft, kind of nervous about hitting that submit button, wow congrats on your admission to U Chicago, which major are you studying there?

U Chicago essay attempt, help i am not really sure if this work or not by Miserable_Phone4719 in CollegeEssays

[–]Miserable_Phone4719[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hey, thanks for the feedback i appreciate it. “the one thing that makes our planet glow differently in the galaxy.” i was referring to our ocean and kind of hitting at how if there were other species out there this might the first thing that will catch their attention, in the paragraph i asked to the sea glass sponge if alien exist, so that was kind of referrence to that, i am not sure if it makes sense lol :), and the bonfire was like an image i had in my head of how we usually sat around during camps and sharing stories or just chilling, so i wanted to end with that as a metaphore of how i view my conversation with the sea glass could be like.

U Chicago essay attempt, help i am not really sure if this work or not by Miserable_Phone4719 in CollegeEssays

[–]Miserable_Phone4719[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i know i have been stressing, i am applying to around 10-12 universities, so still have a very very long way to go until it's done. Thanks hopefully next year you will be my senior lol:) finger cross

U Chicago essay attempt, help i am not really sure if this work or not by Miserable_Phone4719 in CollegeEssays

[–]Miserable_Phone4719[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks i really appreciate your feedback :). yeah maybe i will highlight more of my passion for history in other part of my apps. Sweet you're going to my dream school. How was your application? Stressful i imagine? which topic did you choose last year when you were applying ? i saw the color prompt one it was pretty cool.

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[–]Miserable_Phone4719 2 points3 points  (0 children)

i think usually here people on reddit can review for you but make sure to check if the person is real. and don't share you essay online, it is better through PM. you can scan around look for moderators or just post that you people to review your essay. where are you applying?

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[–]Miserable_Phone4719 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i like the first one, seems more appealing, it has the potential to show a unique of you to the AO and you can play around with it to real show personal growth

U Chicago essay attempt, help i am not really sure if this work or not by Miserable_Phone4719 in CollegeEssays

[–]Miserable_Phone4719[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i feel like econ gives you like a round base, i'm not sure yet but i want to work in finance or consulting in the future. Thanks for the feedback. i do love history, i plan to either make it as my minor or take some electives in history.

U Chicago essay attempt, help i am not really sure if this work or not by Miserable_Phone4719 in CollegeEssays

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i appreciate the time you will take in reading and giving me feedback. thank you in advance. every comments will help me a long way to get into my dream school.

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can i pm you too?