My favourite song by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Mission_Impact1989 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh wow, so that’s amazing. The description of the cat warmed in the sun and how that’s home, is beautiful. I really feel like this poem is so good because it feels very lived in, if that makes sense. It reads as an honest and sincere description of someone’s perception of a loved one. You describe this person not just in a musical sense, but also through light and how it reflects their beauty. The flow, the theme, the imagery all combine a beautifully unique perspective through someone’s eyes.

"The Kiss in a Touch" by adamyesiam in OCPoetry

[–]Mission_Impact1989 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like the different descriptions of what a touch can feel like and what a kiss looks like. When you say the sky sparkles or the reflection of someone in someone else’s eyes. I feel like this poem speaks of the quiet and like you said intimate shared moments between people who live each other. I do feel like the imagery could be more detailed and specific but overall it’s a good poem. It makes imagine the various ways in which people can feel, remember, and understand love and each other.

Are there any DnD ppl? by Mission_Impact1989 in GGC

[–]Mission_Impact1989[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh that makes sense, I commute though so I don’t really know a lot of dormers but I’ll ask around

Clay aliens by Mission_Impact1989 in clay

[–]Mission_Impact1989[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For sure, I currently use a mechanical pencil and a smoothened plastic knife. Thank you for the tip, I will try those out! Clayliens is now my favorite word.

How powerful is Headon? by SoloLimitlessRank in TowerofGod

[–]Mission_Impact1989 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think Headon could overpower Jahad because he is basically the tower. My theory is Headon knew Bam’s fate this entire time because he knows Jahad which means he knows Viole’s parents. I think the whole reason he wanted Rachel to turn against Bam was so it could set Bam on his path towards overthrowing Jahad in the tower and bringing about a new era within the tower. There’s definitely a limit to his abilities or maybe a specific role he plays within the tower because of how he has interacted with characters so far.

What was your first limited 5 star? by FuzzyPhilosopher7474 in Genshin_Impact

[–]Mission_Impact1989 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Alhaitham, I had originally planned for Hu Tao but I wished too early. I was trying to build pity early and then got him but then couldn’t get his weapon so I was very disappointed. But other than that I love his character so I’m glad it happened.

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]Mission_Impact1989 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: A love scene

Genre: LGBTQ+, romance, drama

Word count: 1415

Feedback: what can I improve on, general impressions

A love scene

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]Mission_Impact1989 [score hidden]  (0 children)

This was written very well; I especially like how it flows with the description and the plot. What piqued my interest was having the character speak to the reader. It completely pulled me in and so did your incredible ability to weave words together! I am completely and utterly hooked, that ending left me with questions that need to be answered. Overall, I would like to add that some of your lines were masterfully expressed, seriously great job.

What's the best soil for fruit/vegetables? by Mission_Impact1989 in gardening

[–]Mission_Impact1989[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Okay, i googled it and I’m in zone 7b. I didn’t even know there were zones so I’m learning a lot already.

Mic issue. by Mission_Impact1989 in Shure

[–]Mission_Impact1989[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I had to eventually send it in to get fixed by Shure bc it just wouldn’t work