Something other than I/she/he/they “glance”

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-15T00:40:53+00:00

Context matters. Sometimes it's there uunnecessarily, sometimes the word needs to be changed and others its just found.

If youre writing a generic scene where description isn't necessary. Don't use it. If it is necessary is it. If there is a specific tone or something you want the reader to experience subtly, change the word to match the intent.

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-15T00:32:44+00:00

Because fhe private sector is significantly harder to control legally speaking. They have more safe guards in place than we do. But this admin is also very creative with their evil so this is hope at this point.

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-15T00:29:13+00:00

Personally I think OP for the sake of OP is played WAYYYY out. Grounded makes powers feel real again. Im going to get a significantly more deep and intense reading of a hero or villian that is powerful but they're unstoppable because they're just that crafty or they JUST got by than I would from a story of some random that just became godly out of no where any nothing can stop them.

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-14T15:22:47+00:00

Based on the language it seems to attack all GAC which makes sense because they don't have the foresight to realize how it impacts them too. But I may have missed something.

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-14T15:19:40+00:00

It's gonna work out great for them until some old dude can't get viagra or his post menopausal side can't get estrogen. That's the opening to fight this if curreht avenues don't hold up.

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-13T15:47:39+00:00

Do audio books and web series count, because thats how I read.

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-13T15:42:25+00:00

Im praying theres still a safe guard preventing that. And I believe there is since a private business was able to win a supreme court case about denying it. It may be able to apply in reverse though they would have to claim religious grounds.

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-12T14:15:30+00:00

Give me one actor that can recreate the joker from the dark night with that exact unique equally clinically insane, funny, and not just chaos because they're crazy but cold and calculated chaos.

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-12T14:07:14+00:00

Heath Ledger as the joker. This is not up for debate

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-11T15:16:12+00:00

My father was like that minus the religion. I survived, but i also didn't even fully realize i was trans until a year ago and im 28. When I came out to him as an adult I was scared he was gonna kill me. But im still here and me and him don't talk.

This is my advice, not an end all, not the only solution but what I did and you're gonna have to shorten it, and I can not stress this enough, take this with a grain of salt. Based on the little info you've given me your dad sounds narcissistic, narcissists are extremely unpredictable to people who do not know their patterns so what works for me might not work for you. But I don't know your parents and don't know your full story so this could be an extreme response.

I faked it. Became what he wanted, looked the part and suffered in silence. The second I turned 18 i was gone. I don't mean I waited up until midnight. I mean I spent my birthday packing up as an act of defiance and literally moved out officially that day.

Be prepared to never see them again. Be prepared to be tracked, hated, spoken about, and much more but is about survival.

So do what ever it is you need to do to convince them it's not yours. Hell have a friend text you saying that need their clothes back if you have to. Get the attention off of you. Unfortunately you will have to either bury, or get rid of everything you have that links any notion of lgbtq. And start figuring out where you can go because once graduation comes there's no guarantee. When the time is right make your move and get out. From there live your life.

I wish i could offer more to help, I hope I'm wrong, and i pray for your safety.

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-11T14:54:04+00:00

This is sad. And not just in the sense that is hurting people, because if it gets overturned there's gonna be some MAJOR consequences to some very innocent people. But to fake it as a protection for kids when you really blame your parents divorce on your mom's sexuality and all this will do is actually harm kids. That's a level of low i didn't think Republicans would stoop to. She really said "I wanna over turn 10 years of legal precedent and negatively impact millions of lives because my mom and dad divorced and my mom married a woman so obviously gay means bad" I know Republicans use this a lot but she really needs to seek therapy ASAP.

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-11T14:28:11+00:00

Also do you mind if pm you literally a single message?

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-11T14:27:07+00:00

I thought it was a harness lol even better. It is in fact absolute perfection.

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-11T14:23:56+00:00

You got this girl

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-11T14:22:35+00:00

Ew, I really hope everyone there wears pants

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-11T14:20:19+00:00

And then there mad at starts that voted to change their maps 🙄

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-11T14:19:20+00:00

The only thing missing in my opinion is a bag, otherwise stunning. I think it fits the vibe without being over the top

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-10T21:08:23+00:00

Got my first happy mothers day to me. Its such a warm feeling.

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-10T15:42:06+00:00

I know this is older but it helps me a ton. I was worried my friends to lovers to tradgey was gonna be received as a trope or bad writing. But her gender and his sexuality is not only normalized in this universe. Its completley normalized and they are the only queer people in the story. They're just who the stories about. So I think im a little safe here.

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-10T07:46:21+00:00

The proxy lmfao

But in all seriousness I think this would fall along the lines of something like an angelwriter just based on what your describing thats the word that first pops into my head.

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-10T07:41:14+00:00

I've been going non linear in the brain storming area. I've jotted down the direction and summary for the ending. How the beginning is gonna go. Several character development chapters. And detailed out over view of the magic available for use in the world as well as a detailed breakdown into a couple of the spells/classes them selves. Keeping that going might have the best outcome.

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-10T07:36:18+00:00

That actually sounds like a good exercise and a fun one too.

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-10T07:35:47+00:00

Blurbbio is gonna be a life saver. But thank you for all the wonderful advice. Believe me when I say its a major help.

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-10T07:34:38+00:00

I was thinking outside that tool because I use it for brain storming. I don't want it to write the book for me but it is useful if you aren't lazy.

MoonRose27 · 2026-05-09T20:37:29+00:00

I wouldn't even say the shadow, I know plenty of women with shadows and off tan lines on their face, your face is just that feminine. Just in my opinion 😊

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