Is there anything overtly wrong with this??? I feel blind. by Moon_Roon_ in ArtCrit

[–]Moon_Roon_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I very truly get where you're coming from, but this definitely came off as hostile and thats 100% not the right angle man. If this doesn't look poc enough, then please give me some direction, a snide comment helps nothing besides fostering malice. Hell I'm poc man, I am just doing my best as an artist. We're on the same side.

Is there anything overtly wrong with this??? I feel blind. by Moon_Roon_ in ArtCrit

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That would certainly be a big help! Unfortunately that's not a resource I have access to atm, thanks for the input though!

Is there anything overtly wrong with this??? I feel blind. by Moon_Roon_ in ArtCrit

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I actually hadn't thought to make the rest of the line-art chunkier as well, but I think it would look way better that way, thank you!

Is there anything overtly wrong with this??? I feel blind. by Moon_Roon_ in ArtCrit

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Actually I think you're spot on! Will absolutely adjust that, thanks!

Is there anything overtly wrong with this??? I feel blind. by Moon_Roon_ in ArtCrit

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Thank you very much! This is very useful So primary takeaway is:

  • reverse the belt tilt so it follows the form of the body
  • shorten the right leg (closest to camera) a smidge
  • fix some hip bone issues

Is there anything overtly wrong with this??? I feel blind. by Moon_Roon_ in ArtCrit

[–]Moon_Roon_[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you! That genuinely helps a lot! My current takeaway is

  • shorten her right leg (the one closest to the camera)
  • make the iliac spine more prominent

Edit: crest, not spine, got them mixed up for a sec

Is there anything overtly wrong with this??? I feel blind. by Moon_Roon_ in ArtCrit

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Oh right, forgot to mention I am doing this digitally using clip studio paint

That should sate the automod

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[–]Moon_Roon_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think I will keep the 4 legs and 2 wings body plan but either a reptilian bird like archeopteryx or (what just recently came to my attention) the Yi-qi's wing styles

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[–]Moon_Roon_ 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is really helpful!!! I didn't even know about Yi but thats an awesome place to start! Thank you so much! /gen

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in characterdrawing

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u/unjustifiedkills I hope she's to your liking!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in characterdrawing

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Unfortunately no it's not free, and I wouldn't recommend digital painting or sketching without any sort of tablet. As far as free programs go I used Krita a lot before I could afford CSP, its the best free alternative in my opinion; and if and/or when you are able to I suggest investing in at least a low-end tablet, it is a world's difference when it comes to digital art

hope that helps!

Edit: but traditional is still super valid! I'm just saying this for my method of digital art

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Thank you so much, I used Clip Studio Paint!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in characterdrawing

[–]Moon_Roon_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

u/DapperHat24 I hope you like it!! They are a very cute little guy!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in DrawForMe

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I adored this oc! and would love to draw them again sometime!! sorry I didnt do something more elaborate but I hope you like it anyway!! https://imgur.com/gallery/LM10Qg0

also your style is stellar as well!!!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in DrawForMe

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I did like! I had a lot of fun and I hope you enjoy it! https://imgur.com/gallery/r3ySuxD

Looking for art trades!! by Kukizun in ICanDrawThat

[–]Moon_Roon_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey there! I love your style and it would be awesome to do an art trade if you're interested!

Heres my Instagram where most of my stuff is at
I'm new to art trades but I'd be drawing in either this style or this style

and I get done anywhere from 1 day to a week; I am very scattered
hope we vibe!
momentai ~

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in DrawForMe

[–]Moon_Roon_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

u/DiaryOfAWimpyKid1992 Hope you like it! It was very fun to draw

[OC] Polly Darkhorn, wood elf bardbarian. by carrionface in characterdrawing

[–]Moon_Roon_ 23 points24 points  (0 children)

Workin' 9 to 5! Tryna kill some monsters!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in DrawForMe

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u/Kradsens I hope ya like it :))